Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to start with a direct topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases to make your answer natural and effective.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is my Dyson hair dryer because it dries my hair quickly and smoothly without causing damage. Moreover, it is energy-efficient, which helps me save on electricity bills.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Begin with a direct response, then explain your reasons with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition or unclear words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because as family sizes grow, the amount of laundry and cleaning increases. Therefore, these machines help save time and effort in daily household chores.

Gợi ý: Your answer is on the right track but needs to be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear terms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they provide important guidelines and safety precautions. This helps me use the machine correctly and prolong its lifespan.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be clearer and more natural. Begin with a direct statement, then explain why reading instructions is important with specific details. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, reading instructions is essential before using any product because it helps us understand how to operate it safely and effectively, preventing damage or accidents.

× My Dyson hair dryer is my favorite machine with my home becauses.

✓ My Dyson hair dryer is my favorite machine in my home because.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to indicate location is 'in'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Use 'in my home' to correctly express possession or location.

× It makes my work class by drying my hair with very smooth by giving very small cave not damaging my head too much.

✓ It makes my work easy by drying my hair very smoothly by giving very small heat, not damaging my head too much.

The phrase 'work class' is incorrect; likely intended 'work easy'. 'Very smooth' should be the adverb 'very smoothly' to describe the verb 'drying'. 'Cave' is a wrong word here; 'heat' fits the context. Correct use of adjectives and adverbs is necessary for clarity.

× I also like the cost.

✓ I also like the cost.

This sentence is grammatically correct but lacks clarity. No correction needed here as it fits the context.

× I strongly agree to this statement because nowadays are number of people in a household are being increased and so is the work for work for their clothes.

✓ I strongly agree with this statement because nowadays the number of people in a household is increasing, and so is the work for their clothes.

The phrase 'agree to' should be 'agree with'. The sentence structure is awkward; 'nowadays are number of people' is incorrect; it should be 'nowadays the number of people'. Also, 'are being increased' is passive and awkward; 'is increasing' is better. Repetition 'work for work for' is an error.

× So washing machines and sweeping machines are very primary source of missionaries used in household becauses it.

✓ So washing machines and sweeping machines are very primary sources of machinery used in households because of it.

'Primary source' should be plural 'primary sources' to agree with plural subject. 'Missionaries' is a wrong word; 'machinery' is correct. 'Household' should be plural 'households' to match context. 'Becauses it' is incorrect; 'because of it' or 'because they are' is better.

× I always, you know, I always read the instructions before using the missionaries becaused the instructions are very important and it gives the rules and regulations and also the nodes do's and don't be 'cause it is very important to save the machines for a long.

✓ I always, you know, read the instructions before using the machines because the instructions are very important and they give the rules and regulations and also the notes, do's and don'ts because it is very important to maintain the machines for a long time.

'Missionaries' is incorrect; should be 'machines'. 'Becaused' is misspelled 'because'. 'It gives' should be 'they give' to agree with plural 'instructions'. 'Nodes' is incorrect; 'notes' is correct. 'Don't be' should be 'don'ts'. 'Save the machines for a long' is awkward; 'maintain the machines for a long time' is better.

× It is very primary thing to read the instructions before using or starting a product.

✓ It is a very important thing to read the instructions before using or starting a product.

'Primary' is incorrectly used; 'important' fits better here. Also, 'a' article is needed before 'very important thing'.

× Machinery product instructions are very important in injections at the PowerPoints that says about the machine that helps us to understand easily and work.

✓ Instructions for machinery products are very important, including the points that explain the machine, which help us understand easily and work better.

'Injections at the PowerPoints' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'important points'. 'That says' should be 'that explain' to agree with plural 'points'. Sentence structure is awkward; rephrased for clarity and correctness.