Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“fill rate merchant home”不明确，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is my noise-cancelling headphones because they create a quiet environment that helps me concentrate better when I study. I especially like using them when there is loud background noise around me.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的语法结构，完整表达观点，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because in today's busy life, most people have little time to spend on household chores. These machines help save time and effort.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误，如“Instructions is a great tour”不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions because they guide me on how to use a new machine properly.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，尤其是后半部分。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，避免模糊和错误的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions because they help us use machines correctly and avoid mistakes. Although some people dislike reading them, it is still necessary.

× Uh well my fill rate merchant home is my noise cancelling headphones because they can create very quiet environment for me which helps may concentrate better when I study.

✓ Uh well my favorite machine at home is my noise cancelling headphones because they can create a very quiet environment for me which helps me concentrate better when I study.

这里“very quiet environment”缺少冠词“a”，因为“environment”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。

× Uh well my fill rate merchant home is my noise cancelling headphones because they can create very quiet environment for me which helps may concentrate better when I study.

✓ Uh well my favorite machine at home is my noise cancelling headphones because they can create a very quiet environment for me which helps me concentrate better when I study.

句中“helps may concentrate”中的“may”应为“me”，是人称代词错误。

× Also I specially like using them when there is a loud background noise around me as they.

✓ Also I especially like using them when there is loud background noise around me because of them.

句子结构不完整，“as they”部分不清楚，应改为“because of them”表示原因。

× Yes, of course, because in today's busy life most of people hive are really to spy a time to spend on their household chores, so the working machines and sweeping machines help them save time or effort and.

✓ Yes, of course, because in today's busy life most people have little time to spend on their household chores, so washing machines and sweeping machines help them save time and effort.

“most of people”应为“most people”，“hive”应为“have”，“really to spy a time”表达错误，应为“have little time”，“working machines”应为“washing machines”，句尾“and”多余。

× Yes, of course, because in today's busy life most of people hive are really to spy a time to spend on their household chores, so the working machines and sweeping machines help them save time or effort and.

✓ Yes, of course, because in today's busy life most people have little time to spend on their household chores, so washing machines and sweeping machines help them save time and effort.

“really to spy a time”表达不正确，应使用“have little time”表示时间少。

× Yes, of course, because I think that Instructions is a great tour for me to guide me using the new machine properly.

✓ Yes, of course, because I think that instructions are a great tour for guiding me to use the new machine properly.

“Instructions”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× Yes, of course, because I think that Instructions is a great tour for me to guide me using the new machine properly.

✓ Yes, of course, because I think that instructions are a great guide to help me use the new machine properly.

“a great tour for me to guide me using”表达不自然，应改为“a great guide to help me use”。

× Yes, I think so, because instructions is a formal way for us to understand how to use a machine properly and avoid making mistakes.

✓ Yes, I think so, because instructions are a formal way for us to understand how to use a machine properly and avoid making mistakes.

“instructions”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× Or however someone dislike reading it, maybe I think the like to no knowing about machine by themselves.

✓ However, some people dislike reading it; maybe they prefer to learn about the machine by themselves.

句子结构混乱，语法错误多，需调整为正确的表达方式。