Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如'hott'应为'hot'，'air condition cleaner conditioner'表达不清晰，'milk tea'与前文无关且无连接词，导致表达不自然且不连贯。建议简化表达，避免无关内容，使用正确词汇，并保持句子连贯。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. It helps me stay cool and comfortable during the hot summer months, which is very important for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如'a washer machines under sweep machines'表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，且缺少适当的连接词。建议使用正确的单复数形式，调整句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save me a lot of time. Since I am busy with studying and exercising, these machines help me keep my home clean easily.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇错误，如'you the new machine'应为'using a new machine'，'family'应为'familiar'，且句子不完整。建议注意语法和词汇的准确性，保持句子完整和连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully, especially when using a new machine. This helps me understand how it works and avoid any potential dangers.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如'becaused'应为'because'，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确语法，明确表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because using a new machine without knowing how to operate it can be dangerous.

× In summer the weather is very hott and so without the air condition cleaner conditioner I would feel very uncomfortable.

✓ In summer, the weather is very hot, and so without the air conditioner, I would feel very uncomfortable.

单词'hott'拼写错误，正确拼写为'hot'。此外，'air condition cleaner conditioner'是错误的表达，应为'air conditioner'。需要注意形容词拼写和词语搭配。

× And the milk tea. It helps me stay colander relax, which makes my.

✓ And the milk tea helps me stay cool and relaxed, which makes me feel better.

'colander'是错误单词，正确应为'cool and relaxed'。句子不完整，需要补充完整表达。

× I think a washer machines under sweep machines are very important because they save me a lot of time.

✓ I think washers and sweepers are very important because they save me a lot of time.

'a washer machines'中'a'和复数形式'machines'搭配错误，应统一为复数形式。'under sweep machines'应为'sweep machines'或'sweepers'。

× Since I have a busy with studying and working out, I don't have much time to clean my apartment there for these machines have me to keep my home clean easily.

✓ Since I am busy with studying and working out, I don't have much time to clean my apartment; therefore, these machines help me keep my home clean easily.

句子结构混乱，'a busy'用法错误，应为'am busy'。'there for'应为'therefore'。'have me to keep'应为'help me keep'。需要调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Yes, I always read the instructions carefully, especially when you the new machine.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions carefully, especially when using a new machine.

'when you the new machine'结构不完整且代词使用错误，应改为'when using a new machine'。

× This is because I'm not family with how it works and reading the instructions help me avoid any. Dangerous, Dangerous.

✓ This is because I'm not familiar with how it works, and reading the instructions helps me avoid any danger.

'family'应为形容词'familiar'。'help'应为第三人称单数'helps'，因为主语是'reading the instructions'。'Dangerous'用作名词错误，应改为'danger'。

× Well, I think it's very important to read the instructions, becaused if you use a new machine you don't know how to control the motion and if you don't read the instructions maybe have some dangerous for the new.

✓ Well, I think it's very important to read the instructions because if you use a new machine, you don't know how to control the motion, and if you don't read the instructions, there may be some danger.

'becaused'拼写错误，应为'because'。句子缺少主语，'maybe have some dangerous'应改为'there may be some danger'。

× It with a new motion, so I think it's very important.

✓ It involves a new motion, so I think it's very important.

句子不完整且表达不清，'It with a new motion'缺少动词，应改为'It involves a new motion'。