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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite machine in your home?

Thí sinh

I must to say the air conditioner is the most significant machine.

Giám khảo

Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely it how it helps me to do these shabby so, so that I can have more spare time to do what I like.

Giám khảo

Do you read the instructions before using a machine?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. I don't want to operate it incorrectly. Maybe it could have. Broke the machine.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is important to read the instructions?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course, that's really important to read these instructions carefully before using this method.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

What is your favourite machine in your home?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误,应该说“I must say”而不是“I must to say”。此外,回答较为简单,可以增加一些细节说明为什么空调是最重要的机器。

Ví dụ: I must say the air conditioner is the most significant machine in my home because it keeps the room cool during hot summers, making it very comfortable to live in.

Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不清晰,句子结构混乱。建议使用更清晰的句子表达观点,并且使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines help me complete household chores quickly, so I have more spare time to enjoy my hobbies.

Do you read the instructions before using a machine?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和断句不连贯的问题。建议将句子合并,表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I always read the instructions carefully because I don't want to operate the machine incorrectly and risk breaking it.

Do you think it is important to read the instructions?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中“using this method”表达不准确,应该说“using the machine”。建议使用更准确的词汇,并且句子结构更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. It's really important to read the instructions carefully before using the machine to ensure safety and proper operation.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× I must to say the air conditioner is the most significant machine.

I must say the air conditioner is the most significant machine.

在英语中,情态动词(如 must)后面直接跟动词原形,不需要加 to。这里的错误是多加了 to,正确用法是 must say。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, definitely it how it helps me to do these shabby so, so that I can have more spare time to do what I like.

Yes, definitely, it helps me to do these chores, so that I can have more spare time to do what I like.

句中 'it how it helps' 结构混乱,且 'shabby' 用词错误,应为 'chores'(家务活)。需要去掉多余的词,调整句子结构,使其通顺。

Past tense issue

× Maybe it could have. Broke the machine.

Maybe it could have broken the machine.

这里 'could have' 后面应接动词的过去分词形式,表示对过去可能发生的事情的推测。'Broke' 是动词过去式,错误,应改为过去分词 'broken'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, of course, that's really important to read these instructions carefully before using this method.

Yes, of course, it's really important to read these instructions carefully before using this machine.

句中 'using this method' 不符合上下文,应该是 'using this machine',因为讨论的是机器的使用说明。这里代词使用错误,需改正。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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