Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Thí sinh
You my home. My favorite machine is washing machine. Because it is very convenient. On the ETK. Help me to so many times to do other things.
Giám khảo
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think. It's very important so formatting a knife 'cause it can help me. Simple, minimal, many time to do other things.
Giám khảo
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. Be 'cause. It can help me to use the machine. I don't know some. Most.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it can teach me. A current need to use the machine and the. Safe nest.
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法和表达存在较多错误,建议练习完整句子表达,避免断句和无意义词汇,增加细节描述。
Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it is very convenient. It saves me a lot of time, allowing me to do other important tasks while my clothes are being washed.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰,表达混乱,建议使用完整句子,明确说明原因,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they simplify household chores and save a lot of time, allowing me to focus on other activities.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中断断续续,表达不完整,建议练习连贯表达,清楚说明原因,避免无意义词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and safely, especially when I am not familiar with the device.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达不流畅,语法错误较多,建议练习完整句子表达,明确说明重要性并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they teach me how to use the machine correctly and ensure my safety while operating it.
× You my home.
✓ In my home.
句子缺少谓语动词,导致结构不完整。应补充介词短语使句子完整。
× My favorite machine is washing machine.
✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine.
英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词,缺少定冠词'the'导致错误。
× Because it is very convenient.
✓ Because it is very convenient.
句子为从句,不能单独成句,应与主句合并或改写。
× On the ETK.
✓ It helps me many times to do other things.
原句不完整且含义不明,需重组句子使其完整且通顺。
× Help me to so many times to do other things.
✓ It helps me many times to do other things.
句子缺少主语,且动词形式错误,导致句子不完整。
× Yes, I think.
✓ Yes, I think so.
表达完整意见时,通常需要加副词so来表示肯定。
× It's very important so formatting a knife 'cause it can help me.
✓ It's very important because it can help me.
句子中出现无意义短语“so formatting a knife”,应删除以保持句意清晰。
× Simple, minimal, many time to do other things.
✓ It saves me a lot of time to do other things.
原句词语搭配错误且不完整,需改为正确表达节省时间的句子。
× Be 'cause.
✓ Because.
单词拼写错误,应为'because'。
× It can help me to use the machine.
✓ It can help me use the machine.
动词help后面接动词时,通常不加to。
× I don't know some.
✓ I don't know some parts.
句子不完整,缺少宾语,导致表达不清。
× Most.
✓ Most of them.
单词单独使用不完整,应补充宾语使句子完整。
× Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it can teach me.
✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they can teach me.
指代复数名词instructions时,代词应使用复数形式they。
× A current need to use the machine and the.
✓ how to use the machine correctly and safely.
原句不完整且含义不明,需补充完整表达正确和安全使用机器的意思。
× Safe nest.
✓ safely.
单词拼写错误,应为副词safely,表示“安全地”。