Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors, which affects the natural flow and effectiveness. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use simple and correct sentences, and avoid redundancy. For example, clearly state which machine is your favourite and why, and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes easily. Washing clothes by hand takes a lot of time and effort, so the washing machine makes this task much simpler and faster.

Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear vocabulary and grammar mistakes. To improve, directly answer the question with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent and logical.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important, especially in busy cities like Dubai. They save time and effort in daily cleaning tasks, making household chores easier for everyone.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some good points but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually read the instructions when I use a new machine for the first time. After that, I become familiar with it and don't need to read the manual again. For example, I have been using my washing machine for over five years without problems.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows understanding but is unclear and contains many errors. To improve, give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to make your answer natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions, especially if you are using a machine for the first time. Reading the manual helps you use the machine safely and correctly. However, if you are experienced, you might not need to read it every time.

× Hornist Lee is my washing machine Bishin closer or not the major does every day I have washing machine is one of my favorite person that helped me to do that difficult things.

✓ Hornist Lee is my washing machine. Bishin closer or not, the major does every day. I have a washing machine which is one of my favorite things that helps me to do difficult tasks.

The original sentence has singular and plural confusion, such as 'washing machine is one of my favorite person' which mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. The correction clarifies singular and plural usage by using 'a washing machine' and 'favorite things' appropriately.

× Washing clothes and vessels are the never ending task for me.

✓ Washing clothes and vessels is a never-ending task for me.

The subject 'Washing clothes and vessels' is treated as a singular activity, so the verb should be singular 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'never ending' should be hyphenated as 'never-ending' when used as an adjective.

× That's why I'm considering more Martian mission as the perfect assistant for doing my house over.

✓ That's why I'm considering the washing machine as the perfect assistant for doing my housework.

The phrase 'more Martian mission' seems to be a mishearing or miswriting of 'washing machine'. Also, 'doing my house over' is incorrect; 'doing my housework' is the correct phrase. The correction replaces incorrect adjectives and phrases with appropriate ones.

× I don't possess the sweeping machine as I have a why she mission.

✓ I don't possess a sweeping machine as I have a washing machine.

'Why she mission' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'washing machine'. The pronoun and article usage is corrected to 'a sweeping machine' and 'a washing machine'.

× I'm considering why she mission a son of the important machine in Dubai like city and I think most of the houses here are processing that kind of why she mission and I don't know how they used to sleep in mission as I am a sweep or sipping my rooms with.

✓ I'm considering the washing machine as one of the important machines in a city like Dubai, and I think most houses here possess that kind of washing machine. I don't know how they use a sweeping machine as I sweep my rooms myself.

The sentence has multiple singular/plural errors such as 'son of the important machine' instead of 'one of the important machines', and 'processing' instead of 'possessing'. Also, 'sleep in mission' is incorrect and replaced with 'use a sweeping machine'. The correction addresses these issues.

× Whenever I get a machine first time, I used to read the instruction there, but after using some sometimes I will be very used to to handle that machine and in case of partial mission and more the house whole instrument I using I have been using for more than five or six years, I'm very well.

✓ Whenever I get a machine for the first time, I use to read the instructions, but after using it sometimes, I become very used to handling that machine. In the case of a particular machine or household instrument, I have been using it for more than five or six years, so I am very familiar with it.

The original sentence mixes tenses incorrectly and has awkward phrasing. 'Used to' is corrected to 'use to' for habitual action, and 'will be very used to' is changed to 'become very used to'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× As of as of course, if you doesn't know how to, if you don't know how to handle it, you have to you must read it.

✓ Of course, if you don't know how to handle it, you must read the instructions.

The original sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect verb forms like 'doesn't' with 'you'. The correction uses the correct modal verb 'must' and proper subject-verb agreement.

× And if you are very, very particular and if you're very exposed to use that kind of machine, I think no need to read the installation.

✓ And if you are very familiar and experienced in using that kind of machine, I think there is no need to read the instructions.

'Very exposed to use' is incorrect; it should be 'very familiar and experienced in using'. Also, 'installation' is incorrect here; 'instructions' is the correct word.

× But I'm suggesting every month when custom use for to take precautions and to use to follow the character whether we have to re just worried.

✓ But I suggest that every time a customer uses it, they should take precautions and follow the instructions carefully so that we don't have to worry.

The original sentence is unclear and has incorrect pronouns and phrasing. 'Custom use for to take precautions' is corrected to 'every time a customer uses it, they should take precautions'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun use.