Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议练习简单句的正确表达，避免无意义的词汇和重复。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the computer. I use it every day to play games and study. It has become an important part of my daily life.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的句子和具体理由，建议练习完整句子表达观点并给出理由。

Ví dụ: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort compared to doing these tasks manually.

Gợi ý: 回答基本表达了观点，但句子不完整且有语法错误，建议练习完整句子和正确的因果关系表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me avoid making mistakes.

Gợi ý: 表达了观点但语法和用词错误较多，建议加强因果句型的练习，确保句子完整且准确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it prevents me from making errors when using the machine.

× He might daily life.

✓ It is part of daily life.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应补充完整的主谓结构，使句子通顺。

× I can leave it.

✓ I can't live without it.

原句表达不清，可能想表达“我不能没有它”，应使用正确的短语“can't live without”。

× La compute her.

✓ The computer has

原句无意义，可能是拼写错误，应改为“The computer has”。

× Has been.

✓ has been

单独使用“Has been.”不完整，应与主语连用形成完整句子。

× A part of my life.

✓ a part of my life.

句子缺少主语和谓语，需与前句连贯表达完整意思。

× I don't think at least two machines are important.

✓ I don't think those two machines are important.

“at least two machines”用法不当，应使用指示代词“those”指代前文提到的两台机器。

× I think people can.

✓ I think people can wash clothes and sweep by themselves.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Washing clothes and sweeping.

✓ wash clothes and sweep

短语不完整，应作为动词短语与前句连贯。

× Instead of the. Machines.

✓ instead of machines.

“the”使用不当，泛指机器时不需要定冠词。

× I will read the instruction first.

✓ I will read the instructions first.

“instruction”应使用复数形式“instructions”，表示说明书的内容。

× Because it can. Avoid me to make.

✓ Because it can help me avoid making

“avoid”后应接动名词形式，且“avoid me to make”结构错误，应改为“help me avoid making”。

× LA. Arrows.

✓ errors.

“LA. Arrows.”无意义，推测为“errors”的拼写错误，应改正。

× I will read the instruction first.

✓ I will read the instructions first.

同上，instruction应为复数形式。

× Because it can avoid meat so make errors.

✓ Because it can help me avoid making errors.

“avoid meat so make errors”结构错误，应改为“help me avoid making errors”，动词搭配正确。