Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误，且表达较为冗长。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. I don't have to wash clothes by hand, which is very convenient.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复和不连贯的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. They help us clean our homes more efficiently, especially if the house is large.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但用词和语法不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意句子结构和时态，使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不连贯。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法和连接词，使回答更清晰。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes. Reading instructions is important because it tells us how to use machines safely and effectively, including important safety information.

× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine because I wish this machine I didn't need to wash all the clothes is with my hands and I can bring my clothes to the washing machine and is really convenient for me and save a lot of time.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because I wish with this machine I didn't need to wash all the clothes with my hands and I can bring my clothes to the washing machine. It is really convenient for me and saves a lot of time.

这里“washing machine”前缺少定冠词“the”，且“clothes is”应为“clothes with”，另外“save”应为“saves”以符合主谓一致。衣服是复数，动词要用复数形式。

× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine because I wish this machine I didn't need to wash all the clothes is with my hands and I can bring my clothes to the washing machine and is really convenient for me and save a lot of time.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because I wish with this machine I didn't need to wash all the clothes with my hands and I can bring my clothes to the washing machine. It is really convenient for me and saves a lot of time.

“washing machine”前应加定冠词“the”，因为这里特指家里的洗衣机。

× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine because I wish this machine I didn't need to wash all the clothes is with my hands and I can bring my clothes to the washing machine and is really convenient for me and save a lot of time.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because I wish with this machine I didn't need to wash all the clothes with my hands and I can bring my clothes to the washing machine. It is really convenient for me and saves a lot of time.

“wash all the clothes is with my hands”中“is”用错，应为“with my hands”，表示用手洗衣服。

× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine because I wish this machine I didn't need to wash all the clothes is with my hands and I can bring my clothes to the washing machine and is really convenient for me and save a lot of time.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because I wish with this machine I didn't need to wash all the clothes with my hands and I can bring my clothes to the washing machine. It is really convenient for me and saves a lot of time.

“and is really convenient for me and save a lot of time”中“is”和“save”应与主语一致，改为“It is really convenient for me and saves a lot of time”。

× Yes of course with the washing machines we don't have to clean all the closets on hands and we still sweeping machines.

✓ Yes, of course, with the washing machines we don't have to clean all the clothes by hand and we still have sweeping machines.

“closets”应为“clothes”，且“on hands”应为“by hand”，表示用手洗衣服。

× Yes of course with the washing machines we don't have to clean all the closets on hands and we still sweeping machines.

✓ Yes, of course, with the washing machines we don't have to clean all the clothes by hand and we still have sweeping machines.

“on hands”用法错误，正确表达是“by hand”，表示用手做某事。

× Yes of course with the washing machines we don't have to clean all the closets on hands and we still sweeping machines.

✓ Yes, of course, with the washing machines we don't have to clean all the clothes by hand and we still have sweeping machines.

句子缺少谓语动词“have”，应补充完整。

× If you house a very big or large you didn't need to sweep all the things by yourself.

✓ If your house is very big or large, you don't need to sweep everything by yourself.

“you house”应为“your house”，“things”改为“everything”更合适，且时态应为现在时。

× If you house a very big or large you didn't need to sweep all the things by yourself.

✓ If your house is very big or large, you don't need to sweep everything by yourself.

“didn't need”应改为现在时“don't need”，因为条件句描述的是一般事实。

× An with machine will be save alot.

✓ A machine will save a lot.

“An with machine”结构错误，应为“A machine”，且“be save”错误，应为“save”。

× An with machine will be save alot.

✓ A machine will save a lot.

“alot”应为“a lot”，且“be save”用法错误，应直接用动词“save”。

× Yes, of course, because sometimes I'm not so smart to know this whole structure of the new machine.

✓ Yes, of course, because sometimes I'm not smart enough to understand the whole structure of the new machine.

“not so smart to know”表达不自然，应改为“not smart enough to understand”，更符合英语习惯。

× I have to read the instructions and after I read it I will get details from this and I can better using a machine.

✓ I have to read the instructions and after I read them, I will get details from this and I can use the machine better.

“instructions”是复数，指代时应使用“them”，且“better using a machine”应改为“use the machine better”。

× I have to read the instructions and after I read it I will get details from this and I can better using a machine.

✓ I have to read the instructions and after I read them, I will get details from this and I can use the machine better.

“instructions”是复数，指代时应使用“them”而非“it”。

× I have to read the instructions and after I read it I will get details from this and I can better using a machine.

✓ I have to read the instructions and after I read them, I will get details from this and I can use the machine better.

“better using”用法错误，应为“use ... better”，即动词+副词结构。

× Definitely yes. Without the instructions, I can know how to use the machines.

✓ Definitely yes. Without the instructions, I cannot know how to use the machines.

句意应为“没有说明书我不知道怎么用机器”，原句“can know”表达错误，应为“cannot know”。

× Besides, there are some more details and on the underlying informations behind the instruction, such as safety information.

✓ Besides, there are some more details and underlying information behind the instructions, such as safety information.

“informations”是不可数名词，应为“information”，且“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。

× So it's.

✓ So it's important.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。