Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Thí sinh
I forwarded on my shoe. Is, I said, focusing in my home. Kurt because it can. Is it can? Keep cable visible. Free shipping. So I figured the machine you.
Giám khảo
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Thí sinh
Yes, the I think a washing machines under spraying machine is very important because why? Why I was tired. I can't undermine my parents. Les Main washing washing clothes on the spray and spray icon.
Giám khảo
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have it as a instructions before using on mission messing. Because I seem fairly regular instructions user. Oh. Wait is over time? So I don't.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Thí sinh
No, I think the it's not important to redo their instructions because every every machine several different use yours. I I can't study. It's.
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达,句子结构混乱,无法准确传达你的意思。建议你在回答时先明确主题句,然后用简洁的句子补充细节,避免语法错误和无关内容。
Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly and efficiently.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不清,语法和词汇使用错误较多,导致意思难以理解。建议你直接回答问题,使用简单明了的句子,并用具体理由支持你的观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and reduce physical effort when doing household chores.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不连贯,语法错误多,表达不清楚。建议你用完整的句子直接回答问题,并说明原因,保持语言简洁自然。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I am familiar with how to operate most devices.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答语法和表达混乱,难以理解。建议你明确表达自己的观点,并用简单的句子说明理由,避免重复和错误。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think it is always important to read the instructions because many machines are easy to use and similar to others I have used before.
× I forwarded on my shoe. Is, I said, focusing in my home. Kurt because it can. Is it can? Keep cable visible. Free shipping. So I figured the machine you.
✓ I focused on my shoe. I said, focusing in my home because it can keep the cable visible and free shipping. So I figured the machine you.
句子结构混乱,缺少连贯性和完整的句子。建议理清句子逻辑,使用完整句子表达意思。
× Yes, the I think a washing machines under spraying machine is very important because why?
✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because...
名词单复数使用错误,washing machines和sweeping machines应保持一致的复数形式。
× Why I was tired. I can't undermine my parents. Les Main washing washing clothes on the spray and spray icon.
✓ Because I was tired, I can't help my parents wash clothes by hand.
句子结构不完整且混乱,建议使用完整句子表达因果关系。
× No, I don't have it as a instructions before using on mission messing.
✓ No, I don't read the instructions before using the machine.
冠词使用错误,instructions前应使用复数形式且不加不定冠词a。
× Because I seem fairly regular instructions user. Oh. Wait is over time? So I don't.
✓ Because I am a fairly regular user of instructions. Oh, wait, over time? So I don't.
句子结构混乱,缺少主谓一致,建议理清句子结构。
× No, I think the it's not important to redo their instructions because every every machine several different use yours.
✓ No, I think it's not important to read the instructions because every machine has several different uses.
代词使用错误,their和yours使用不当,应使用正确的指代词。
× I I can't study. It's.
✓ I can't study it.
句子不完整,缺少宾语,建议补充完整句子。