Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时句子结构不够自然，存在语法错误，且表达重复。建议简化句子，避免冗余，使用更地道的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I am not very patient because I tend to give up if I have to try something many times without success.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致和时态，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Unsuccessful experiences make me feel impatient. For example, if I try a task many times but don't succeed, I get frustrated.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误明显，缺少连贯性。建议完整表达情感变化，使用连接词连接句子。

Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel tired and confused. However, if I succeed in the end, I feel very happy; if I fail, I feel disappointed.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并且句子结构更自然。

Ví dụ: My job requires me to be patient because I have to read many books and write comments. I also need to correct my mistakes carefully.

Gợi ý: 表达不连贯且有语法错误，部分词汇使用错误。建议理清思路，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. In the past, I would give up easily, but now I can persist and never give up on tasks.

× I think I am not actually a patient person because although I will try a lot many times for doing a task, but I will give up when I try a long time.

✓ I think I am not actually a patient person because although I will try many times to do a task, I will give up when I try for a long time.

句中使用了两个连词“because although”和“but”，造成连接词重复，应去掉“but”。此外，“a lot many times”表达不自然，应改为“many times”，并且“for doing a task”应改为“to do a task”。

× I would say it's the unsuccessful experience makes I feel impatient.

✓ I would say it's the unsuccessful experience that makes me feel impatient.

“makes I feel”中主格“I”用错，应使用宾格“me”，且缺少关系代词“that”引导定语从句。

× For example if I do a task for many times but I don't got success, I will feel very impatient.

✓ For example, if I do a task many times but don't get success, I will feel very impatient.

“don't got”时态错误，应为“don't get”，因为“got”是过去式，句中应使用一般现在时。

× If after a long time I get successful, I will feel happy but I get failure I will feel.

✓ If after a long time I succeed, I will feel happy, but if I fail, I will feel unhappy.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和主语，导致表达不完整，应补充“if”和主语，调整句子顺序使其通顺。

× My job require I to be patient.

✓ My job requires me to be patient.

主语“job”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“requires”，宾语“我”应使用宾格“me”。

× Also I need to correct the word I make.

✓ Also I need to correct the words I make.

“word”应为复数形式“words”，因为通常指多个单词。

× I strongly believe that I am patient. I am more patient now because when I was a child I will not.

✓ I strongly believe that I am patient. I am more patient now because when I was a child I was not.

“when I was a child I will not”时态错误，应使用过去时“was not”，与时间状语“when I was a child”保持一致。

× I didn't do a task for a long time and very easy to give up, but now I will do a taxi for a long time.

✓ I didn't do a task for a long time and was very easy to give up, but now I will do a task for a long time.

“very easy to give up”缺少主语和谓语，应补充“was”，且“do a taxi”应为“do a task”。

× And just do and never give up.

✓ I just do it and never give up.

句子缺少主语和宾语，表达不完整，应补充“it”使句子完整。