Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích rõ ràng hơn với các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I am not a patient person because I often feel annoyed when I have to wait for others. For example, I get bored and frustrated when playing games that require a lot of patience.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý của bạn.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to wait for someone for a long time. Also, I get frustrated when I play games that require a lot of patience to solve.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cảm xúc của bạn.

Ví dụ: When I do something interesting, I feel excited at first. However, if I have to do it for a long time, I start to feel tired, frustrated, and a bit exhausted.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy giải thích cụ thể về công việc và tại sao nó đòi hỏi sự kiên nhẫn.

Ví dụ: In the future, I want to work as a software engineer. This job requires a lot of patience because I need to design and test systems carefully.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về cách bạn đã trở nên kiên nhẫn hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I didn't know how to handle situations that required patience, but now I have learned to stay calm, especially when waiting for others.

× No I am not a patient person because I feel so annoyed when I wait for someone or just know something in patient way.

✓ No, I am not a patient person because I feel so annoyed when I wait for someone or just know something in a patient way.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'patient way'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'a' makes the phrase grammatically correct.

× I just feel boring and also tedious when play some games that need.

✓ I just feel bored and also find it tedious when I play some games that require patience.

The adjective 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, while 'bored' describes a feeling of the person. The student should use 'bored' to express their feeling. Also, the sentence lacks the subject 'I' before 'play' and the verb 'require' is missing the object 'patience' to complete the meaning.

× There are various things that make me feel impatient, like waiting for someone too long or have I have to do some muscles or play some game that required the patience to solve.

✓ There are various things that make me feel impatient, like waiting for someone too long or having to do some exercises or play some games that require patience to solve.

The phrase 'have I have to do some muscles' is incorrect; it should be 'having to do some exercises'. Also, 'play some game' should be plural 'play some games' to agree with 'some'. The verb 'required' should be present tense 'require' to match the context.

× So I think it is so tedious and frustrated to do.

✓ So I think it is so tedious and frustrating to do.

The adjective 'frustrated' describes a feeling experienced by a person, while 'frustrating' describes something that causes frustration. Here, the activity is tedious and frustrating, so 'frustrating' is correct.

× If it is an interesting activity at first, I will feel excited and amazed when initially I do that.

✓ If it is an interesting activity at first, I will feel excited and amazed when I initially do it.

The verb 'do' requires an object here. 'That' is less natural than 'it' in this context. Also, the sentence structure is improved by placing 'initially' before 'do'.

× But for a long time I feel tired and frustrated and also feel a little bit exhausted when do it for a long time.

✓ But after a long time, I feel tired and frustrated and also a little bit exhausted when I do it for a long time.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'do it'. Also, 'for a long time' is better expressed as 'after a long time' to indicate the passage of time before feeling tired.

× In my future I will opt for some cheer for engineering, so it require my patience to do and explore some design for the system to make the software.

✓ In my future, I will opt for a career in engineering, so it requires my patience to do and explore some designs for the system to make the software.

'Cheer' is incorrect; the correct word is 'career'. The verb 'require' should be 'requires' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Design' should be plural 'designs' to match 'some'. Also, adding commas improves clarity.

× So I think it is quite required.

✓ So I think it is quite necessary.

The phrase 'quite required' is awkward. 'Necessary' is a better adjective to express the idea that patience is needed.

× Yes, of course, because when I was a child I didn't know how to react with the impatient situation.

✓ Yes, of course, because when I was a child I didn't know how to react to impatient situations.

The verb 'react' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'with'. Also, 'impatient situation' should be plural 'impatient situations' to generalize the meaning.

× But when I I'm more mature I learned how to deal with some impatient situation like waiting for someone that make me feel.

✓ But now that I am more mature, I have learned how to deal with impatient situations like waiting for someone that makes me feel impatient.

The original sentence has grammatical errors and incomplete thoughts. 'When I I'm more mature' is incorrect; it should be 'now that I am more mature'. The verb tense should be present perfect 'have learned' to indicate experience up to now. 'Some impatient situation' should be plural 'impatient situations'. The clause 'that make me feel' is incomplete and needs to specify what feeling it causes, e.g., 'makes me feel impatient'.