Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Most of the time I am, I think, you know, my study is very complex and full of details, so it needs me to be a very patient person to do it well. And I take this habit to my life. So I think I'm a patient person.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
I guess maybe few things. Oh the traffic. I hate the traffic jam, so if the traffic is very awful I will be really impatient. But about another occurrence I have no idea.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
It depends on the things that I have to do. If the thing that I'm interested that I will feel relaxed and enjoyable, but if the things that annoyed me, I will feel impatient and frustrated.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Although I haven't work yet, but in my future plan, my job needs my patience.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. Actually. I am a patient person all along, but I think maybe I was more patient when I was a child.
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Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免口语填充词如“you know”，使表达更自然流畅。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达“我认为我是一个有耐心的人”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because my studies are complex and require careful attention to detail. This habit has also helped me in daily life.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中应避免模糊表达如“maybe few things”和“about another occurrence I have no idea”，应具体说明原因并使用连词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient mainly when I am stuck in heavy traffic jams because they waste my time and cause frustration.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法准确，如“the thing that I'm interested in”。同时，使用连接词如“however”使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: It depends on the task. If I am interested in it, I feel relaxed and enjoy it; however, if it annoys me, I become impatient and frustrated.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中应避免语法错误，如“haven't worked yet”，并避免使用“although...but”结构。句子应更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I haven't started working yet, but I plan to have a job that requires a lot of patience.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答应避免断句不连贯，如“Actually.”，并且表达应更简洁明确。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think I am more patient now. I have always been patient, but perhaps I was even more patient as a child.
Ngữ pháp
× I guess maybe few things.
✓ I guess maybe a few things.
这里缺少冠词'a'，'few'前面通常需要加'a'表示'一些'，否则意思会变成'几乎没有'。应使用'a few'表示'一些'。
× If the thing that I'm interested that I will feel relaxed and enjoyable, but if the things that annoyed me, I will feel impatient and frustrated.
✓ If the thing that I'm interested in, I will feel relaxed and enjoy it, but if the things annoy me, I will feel impatient and frustrated.
句中'interest'后缺少介词'in'，且动词时态和形式不正确。'enjoyable'是形容词，需改为动词'enjoy'。另外，'things'复数时动词应用复数形式'annoy'。
× Although I haven't work yet, but in my future plan, my job needs my patience.
✓ Although I haven't worked yet, in my future plan, my job needs my patience.
'haven't work'中work应为过去分词worked，构成现在完成时。且句中'although'和'but'重复使用，'but'应去掉。
× Although I haven't work yet, but in my future plan, my job needs my patience.
✓ Although I haven't worked yet, in my future plan, my job needs my patience.
'Although'和'but'不能同时使用，二者都是转折连词，使用其中一个即可。
× If the thing that I'm interested that I will feel relaxed and enjoyable, but if the things that annoyed me, I will feel impatient and frustrated.
✓ If the thing that I'm interested in, I will feel relaxed and enjoy it, but if the things annoy me, I will feel impatient and frustrated.
'thing'单数时动词用单数，'things'复数时动词用复数，保持主谓一致。
× If the thing that I'm interested that I will feel relaxed and enjoyable, but if the things that annoyed me, I will feel impatient and frustrated.
✓ If the thing that I'm interested in, I will feel relaxed and enjoy it, but if the things annoy me, I will feel impatient and frustrated.
'interested'后面应接介词'in'，表示对某事感兴趣。
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