Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有點重複，且語句不夠流暢。建議直接回答問題，並用一兩句具體說明你如何展現耐心，避免冗言贅詞。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am a patient person because my job as a caregiver requires me to assist people calmly and attentively every day.

Gợi ý: 回答中語法錯誤較多，且表達不夠清晰。建議使用連接詞組織句子，並具體說明原因。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to wait for someone for a long time because it makes me bored and frustrated, which ruins my mood for the day.

Gợi ý: 句子結構不完整且語法錯誤，建議先用主題句回答，再用連接詞補充細節，並注意時態和單複數。

Ví dụ: I feel unhappy when I have to do something for a long time because it makes me bored and tired.

Gợi ý: 回答不清楚且有語言錯誤，建議先明確回答問題，再用簡單句子說明原因，避免不必要的詞彙錯誤。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I help elderly people with their daily needs, such as giving them water.

Gợi ý: 回答內容混亂且語法錯誤多，建議先明確表達比較結果，再用連接詞說明原因，並注意用詞準確。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I am almost 35 and my job involves taking care of elderly people, which has taught me how to be patient.

× I have to appear to have a patient personality for helping people, for daily assistance.

✓ I have to appear to have a patient personality to help people, for daily assistance.

The phrase 'for helping people' is incorrect because after 'for' we usually use a noun or gerund that functions as a noun. However, in this context, 'to help' (infinitive) is more appropriate to express purpose. So, 'to help people' is the correct form here.

× I cannot let someone too long because waiting someone too long makes me feel bored, make me feel frustrated and make my day bad.

✓ I cannot let someone wait too long because waiting for someone too long makes me feel bored, makes me feel frustrated, and makes my day bad.

The verb 'wait' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating the person being waited for. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'waiting for someone too long'. Additionally, 'let someone too long' is incorrect; it should be 'let someone wait too long'.

× waiting someone too long makes me feel bored, make me feel frustrated and make my day bad.

✓ waiting for someone too long makes me feel bored, makes me feel frustrated, and makes my day bad.

The verbs 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'waiting for someone too long'. Each verb must agree in number with the subject.

× My feel unhappy because it takes many times that's it's make me feel bored.

✓ I feel unhappy because it takes a long time, and it makes me feel bored.

'My feel unhappy' is incorrect; the subject should be 'I'. 'It takes many times' is awkward; 'it takes a long time' is more natural. Also, 'that's it's make me feel bored' is ungrammatical; it should be 'and it makes me feel bored'.

× Well, I currently love I should give you water.

✓ Well, I currently love my job because I should give water to people.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'I currently love I should give you water' does not make sense. It should be rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly, such as 'I currently love my job because I should give water to people.'

× That's why I have to patient with my job.

✓ That's why I have to be patient with my job.

The verb 'have to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'have to be patient' is correct. Also, 'patient' is an adjective and needs the verb 'be' to link it.

× My job is uh, helping other DVD care.

✓ My job is, uh, helping other people with daily care.

'Helping other DVD care' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'helping other people with daily care' to make sense in context.

× Yes, I'm a different person now. Uh, last time when I was traveling, I'm not impatient, but now I'm more impatient because my agent now almost 35 and my job is, uh, taking elderly then I know how to handle elderly people. I must.

✓ Yes, I'm a different person now. Uh, last time when I was traveling, I was not impatient, but now I'm more impatient because my age is almost 35 and my job is, uh, taking care of elderly people, so I know how to handle them. I must.

'I'm not impatient' should be past tense 'I was not impatient' to match 'last time'. 'My agent' is incorrect; it should be 'my age'. 'Taking elderly' is incomplete; it should be 'taking care of elderly people'. Also, pronouns like 'them' are needed to refer back to 'elderly people'. The sentence 'I must' is incomplete and should be connected properly.