Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại cụm từ "in some case" và sử dụng thì đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: I am generally not a very patient person, but in my work related to media, I have to be patient to handle tasks carefully. However, in my personal life, I tend to be less patient.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "burnt out" trong ngữ cảnh này. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when things don't go as planned, especially at work. However, I try to stay calm because maintaining a positive attitude helps me deal with challenges.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "enjoy of it" và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời cần có câu chủ đề và chi tiết cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy.

Ví dụ: I enjoy doing my work and activities like reading novels or studying because they interest me. However, if I have to do tasks that are not my strengths, I tend to become impatient.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "media major" trong câu trả lời. Câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, my job in the media field requires a lot of patience because I need to focus on details. However, when I have to do tasks outside my interests, I sometimes find it hard to stay patient and concentrate.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "come through a very problem". Câu trả lời cần có câu chủ đề và chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have faced many challenges, such as my parents' divorce and social pressures from work and study. These experiences have helped me accept my future calmly.

× Not at all, but in some case in my work I still be a patient person because I'm related to a media major, but in some case in the real life I'm not a patient person.

✓ Not at all, but in some cases in my work I still am a patient person because I'm related to a media major, but in some cases in real life I'm not a patient person.

The phrase 'some case' should be plural 'some cases' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'I still be' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I still am' to match the present tense and subject.

× Umm something makes me feel impatient, that example when things don't go as planned or when they burnt out in my work but I'm still keep me patient because I think it is that a fine mood to face to everything.

✓ Umm something makes me feel impatient, for example when things don't go as planned or when they burn out in my work but I still keep patient because I think it is a good mood to face everything.

The verb 'burnt' is past tense; here, present tense 'burn' is needed to match 'when they burn out'. Also, 'I'm still keep me patient' is incorrect; it should be 'I still keep patient' to use the correct verb form and avoid reflexive pronoun misuse.

× If I have to do my work, I'm really enjoy of it because umm, my work is media major and something like, umm, reading novels or study and I'm really enjoying it.

✓ If I have to do my work, I really enjoy it because, umm, my work is in media major and involves things like, umm, reading novels or studying and I'm really enjoying it.

The phrase 'I'm really enjoy of it' is incorrect; it should be 'I really enjoy it'. Also, 'study' should be in gerund form 'studying' to match the list of activities.

× But if I have to do some work, it's not my talent. I'm impatient.

✓ But if I have to do some work, it's not my talent. I'm impatient.

No correction needed here as 'some work' is uncountable and correctly used.

× Yes, because my job is related to media major and that's my talent. Or something related to novels or reading, that's my interest.

✓ Yes, because my job is related to media major and that's my talent. Also, something related to novels or reading is my interest.

Starting a sentence with 'Or' is incorrect here; 'Also' or 'Additionally' is more appropriate to connect ideas.

× But sometimes I have to do something, it's not my talent or interest.

✓ But sometimes I have to do something that is not my talent or interest.

The sentence is a run-on; adding 'that is' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Yes, because I have to uh, come through a very problem like my parents broke up when I was five years old and something comes from social like my work, my study.

✓ Yes, because I had to go through a difficult problem like my parents breaking up when I was five years old and challenges from social aspects like my work and my study.

The phrase 'have to come through a very problem' is incorrect; past tense 'had to go through' is appropriate. Also, 'very problem' is incorrect; 'difficult problem' is better. 'Something comes from social' is unclear; rephrased for clarity.