Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think I'm a patient person since I'm good at taking care about the children. So maybe, maybe I'm I'm the person who can tolerate something.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
If I need to repeat some words or something to make make the person understand me, I think maybe I will lose my patience.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
Well, it be depends on the situation, what kind of things it is. If I'm doing the things that I need to focus on it and put all my energy and intelligence in it, maybe I can do it for a long time without in frustration. But if it's easy and impaired.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Yes, one of my job opti uh, job responsibilities is to communicating between different teams. So it's very important for me to talk to different people with patients until they understand our goal and what we need to do in the next.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so because my work also shapes my personality and it makes me become more patient. Since I just mentioned above, I have to communicate with different teams to make sure things goes well, so it's very important for me to become patient.
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Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ เช่น เริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง จากนั้นเสริมรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเกี่ยวข้อง
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I often take care of children, which requires a lot of tolerance and understanding.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อทำให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและชัดเจนขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น ใช้คำว่า 'when' หรือ 'if' เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค และให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับสถานการณ์
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to repeat myself several times because it can be frustrating if the other person doesn't understand me quickly.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์ ใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ถูกต้องหรือไม่สมบูรณ์ เช่น 'impaired' ที่ไม่เหมาะสมในบริบทนี้ ควรอธิบายความรู้สึกอย่างชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม
Ví dụ: It depends on the task. If it's challenging and requires my full attention, I can stay focused for a long time without feeling frustrated. However, if the task is boring or repetitive, I tend to lose patience quickly.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ หลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่แน่นอนหรือคำที่พูดติดอ่าง และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'patience' แทน 'patients' นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล
Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I need to communicate between different teams and ensure everyone understands our goals and next steps clearly.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมอย่างเหมาะสม เช่น 'because' และ 'therefore' เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผลและผลลัพธ์ นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและใช้คำศัพท์ที่หลากหลาย
Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because my work requires me to communicate with different teams, which has helped me develop greater patience.
Ngữ pháp
× I'm good at taking care about the children.
✓ I'm good at taking care of the children.
The correct preposition to use with 'taking care' is 'of', not 'about'. So, it should be 'taking care of the children'.
× I think maybe I will lose my patience.
✓ I think maybe I will lose my patience.
No correction needed here as 'patience' is uncountable and used correctly.
× Well, it be depends on the situation, what kind of things it is.
✓ Well, it depends on the situation, what kind of things it is.
The verb 'be' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is 'it depends' without 'be'.
× If I'm doing the things that I need to focus on it and put all my energy and intelligence in it, maybe I can do it for a long time without in frustration.
✓ If I'm doing the things that I need to focus on and put all my energy and intelligence into it, maybe I can do it for a long time without frustration.
The phrase 'focus on it' is correct but 'put all my energy and intelligence in it' should be 'put all my energy and intelligence into it'. Also, 'without in frustration' is incorrect; it should be 'without frustration'.
× But if it's easy and impaired.
✓ But if it's easy and impaired.
The sentence is incomplete and 'impaired' is not appropriate here. Possibly, the intended word is 'boring' or 'simple'. However, since it doesn't meet the grammar problem list, no correction is made.
× Yes, one of my job opti uh, job responsibilities is to communicating between different teams.
✓ Yes, one of my job responsibilities is communicating between different teams.
The phrase 'is to communicating' is incorrect. It should be 'is communicating' or 'is to communicate'. Also, 'job opti uh' seems like a hesitation and should be removed.
× So it's very important for me to talk to different people with patients until they understand our goal and what we need to do in the next.
✓ So it's very important for me to talk to different people with patience until they understand our goal and what we need to do next.
The word 'patients' is incorrect; the correct word is 'patience' (noun). Also, 'in the next' is incomplete; it should be 'next'.
× Since I just mentioned above, I have to communicate with different teams to make sure things goes well, so it's very important for me to become patient.
✓ Since I just mentioned above, I have to communicate with different teams to make sure things go well, so it's very important for me to become patient.
The verb 'goes' does not agree with the plural subject 'things'. It should be 'things go well'.
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