Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly why you find it hard to be patient. Avoid repeating ideas and filler words.

Ví dụ: No, I am not a patient person because when I get angry, I find it hard to forgive quickly. I feel that the person might repeat the mistake, which makes me less patient.

Gợi ý: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so yeah'.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when someone lies to me or treats me badly because it breaks my trust and makes me angry.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear and complete answer without hesitation or repetition. Use linking words to explain your feelings logically and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually feel tired when I have to do something for a long time because continuous effort can be exhausting.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Explain why your future job will require patience with specific details.

Ví dụ: I don't have a job now, but I plan to become a teacher in the future. This job will require patience because I will need to help students learn and handle different situations calmly.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more organized. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain how maturity has increased your patience.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because as an adult, I can take more responsibilities and better understand what is good or bad for me, which helps me be more patient.

× when they treated me so bad

✓ when they treated me so badly

The word 'bad' is an adjective, but here it should be an adverb modifying the verb 'treated'. The correct adverb form is 'badly'.

× and patient is bigger things

✓ and patience is a bigger thing

The word 'patient' is an adjective or noun meaning a person receiving medical care, but here the intended meaning is the noun 'patience'. Also, 'bigger things' is plural and vague; it should be 'a bigger thing' to refer to the concept of patience as a singular abstract noun.