Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, complete your sentences fully to sound natural.

Ví dụ: No, I am not a patient person because I juggle two jobs and take care of my children. When things don't go as planned, I get frustrated quickly.

Gợi ý: Good explanation with relevant details. To improve, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid minor grammar mistakes for better clarity.

Ví dụ: Since I work online as a freelancer, a strong Internet connection is essential. Therefore, when the Internet is slow, I feel impatient because it affects my work and my clients are waiting.

Gợi ý: Your answer covers the question well but contains some grammar errors and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and check verb agreement.

Ví dụ: When I do something for a long time, I tend to get bored and exhausted mentally and physically. Therefore, I take short breaks, have snacks, or watch movies to regain my energy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and a bit repetitive. Try to finish your sentences and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: No, my freelancing job does not require much patience because I work independently at my own pace and do not have to answer to many people.

Gợi ý: Good content but contains double negatives and some grammar mistakes. Try to use simpler sentences and avoid double negatives for clarity.

Ví dụ: No, I am less patient now than when I was a child because I have more responsibilities and need to be active and alert all the time, unlike in childhood.

× So whenever things don't go as I have planned, I easily get frustrated and.

✓ So whenever things don't go as I have planned, I easily get frustrated.

The sentence ends with 'and' which is a conjunction and requires a following clause. Since the sentence ends abruptly, it is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× I tend to get frustrated and feel it hard to stay calm because my work effects and all my clients are also waiting for my connection to restore.

✓ I tend to get frustrated and find it hard to stay calm because my work is affected and all my clients are also waiting for my connection to be restored.

The phrase 'feel it hard' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'find it hard'. Also, 'my work effects' is incorrect; it should be 'my work is affected'. Additionally, 'waiting for my connection to restore' is incorrect; it should be 'waiting for my connection to be restored' to use the passive form correctly.

× When I have to do something for a long time, it tend to get boring for me.

✓ When I have to do something for a long time, it tends to get boring for me.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'tends' (third person singular) instead of 'tend'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× Also it exhausts me both mentally and physically and I lost interest in it.

✓ Also it exhausts me both mentally and physically and I lose interest in it.

The sentence is describing a habitual or general situation, so present tense 'lose' should be used instead of past tense 'lost' to maintain tense consistency.

× So to restore my energy and interest back, I take a short break, have some snacks on, watch some movies as well.

✓ So to restore my energy and interest, I take a short break, have some snacks, and watch some movies as well.

The phrase 'have some snacks on' is incorrect; 'have some snacks' is correct. Also, 'restore my energy and interest back' is redundant; 'back' is unnecessary after 'restore'. Adding 'and' before 'watch some movies' improves sentence structure.

× So I have a task and I work it on my own pace and I work alone and independently, so I don't have to be answerable for each and everything to every person.

✓ So I have a task and I work at my own pace and I work alone and independently, so I don't have to be answerable for everything to anyone.

The correct preposition is 'at my own pace' not 'on my own pace'. Also, 'each and everything to every person' is awkward; 'everything to anyone' is more natural and correct.

× No, I feel I am less patient now than when I was a child because in childhood there were not no job responsibilities and no one requires me to be active and alert all the time.

✓ No, I feel I am less patient now than when I was a child because in childhood there were no job responsibilities and no one required me to be active and alert all the time.

The phrase 'there were not no' is a double negative and incorrect; it should be 'there were no'. Also, 'no one requires me' should be in past tense 'no one required me' to match 'when I was a child'.

× So patient wasn't the major requirement during childhood as it is now.

✓ So patience wasn't a major requirement during childhood as it is now.

The word 'patient' is an adjective; the correct noun form here is 'patience'. Also, 'the major requirement' is changed to 'a major requirement' for natural expression.