Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "if I am never late" which should be "if I am running late." Also, the example is not fully coherent. Try to use more natural expressions and ensure your examples directly support your point. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I used to be very patient because I believed taking my time helped me do things properly. However, now I tend to be less patient, especially when I'm in a hurry. For instance, if I'm running late, I rush to get to my destination quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes such as "a few day later" instead of "a few days away." Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be more specific about why time pressure makes you impatient.

Ví dụ: Time pressure makes me feel impatient. For example, when a deadline is only a few days away and I haven't started my work, I become anxious and restless because I worry I won't finish on time.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. The phrase "I always feel very boring" should be "I always feel very bored." Also, the example is confusing. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your feelings with a relevant example using linking words.

Ví dụ: I usually feel very bored when I have to do something for a long time. For instance, as an undergraduate student, I have to study for three years, which sometimes feels like a long and tiring process.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too long and contains unclear phrases like "computer science studies computer science." Try to organise your answer with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about why your future job will require patience.

Ví dụ: Currently, my job as a student does not require much patience because I focus on my studies. However, in the future, I believe my job in computer science will require patience, especially when solving complex problems or working on long projects.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as "experienced so much legs going by my teacher." Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain why you are more patient now and provide specific examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I lacked life experience and often became impatient, which sometimes led to mistakes and trouble. However, with time and guidance from my teachers and parents, I have learned to be more patient.

× In the past, I was a very patient person because I believe that taking my time helped me do things properly.

✓ In the past, I was a very patient person because I believed that taking my time helped me do things properly.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is about the past, 'believe' should be changed to 'believed' to maintain consistent past tense.

× For example, if I am never late, I will just rush to your location.

✓ For example, if I am ever late, I will just rush to your location.

The phrase 'if I am never late' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'if I am ever late' to express the possibility of being late.

× If the deadline is just a few day later, if I don't do the work by now, I will feel very impatient.

✓ If the deadline is just a few days later, if I don't do the work by now, I will feel very impatient.

The noun 'day' should be plural 'days' because it refers to more than one day.

× So that I think time will make me feel impatient.

✓ So, I think time makes me feel impatient.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'So that' is incorrectly used; it should be 'So,' and the verb tense should be present simple to express a general truth.

× I always feel very boring because I have some experience of doing something for a long time late.

✓ I always feel very bored because I have some experience of doing something for a long time.

'Boring' describes something that causes boredom; 'bored' describes the feeling. Also, 'late' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× I have just passed.

✓ I have just passed.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I'm a undergraduate currently and I just passed the DSC and I have to study for three years.

✓ I'm an undergraduate currently and I just passed the DSC and I have to study for three years.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'undergraduate'.

× Not really because I am just a student and I want to focus on my studies and but in my future I think my job requires me to be patient because I want to be a computer science studies computer science and I would be at some finding some job related to computers so I would be patient.

✓ Not really because I am just a student and I want to focus on my studies, but in the future, I think my job will require me to be patient because I want to study computer science and find a job related to computers, so I will need to be patient.

The sentence has multiple conjunction errors and awkward phrasing. 'And but' is incorrect; it should be 'but'. Also, 'computer science studies computer science' is redundant and unclear; it should be 'study computer science'. The phrase 'I would be at some finding some job' is incorrect and should be 'find a job'. Verb tenses and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× Yes, of course. When I was a child I don't feel patient because I don't have many life experience by now I've experienced so much legs going by my teacher or my parents because I I'm being impatient so I make some mistakes and cause some trouble.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, I didn't feel patient because I didn't have much life experience. By now, I've experienced so much, learning from my teachers and parents because I was impatient, so I made some mistakes and caused some trouble.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and tense errors. 'I don't feel' should be past tense 'I didn't feel' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Many life experience' should be 'much life experience' because 'experience' is uncountable. 'Legs going by my teacher or my parents' is unclear and incorrect; it is corrected to 'learning from my teachers and parents'. 'I'm being impatient' should be past tense 'I was impatient'. 'Make' and 'cause' should be past tense 'made' and 'caused'.