Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“help my friends should to deal”不符合英语表达习惯，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意时态和词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. I often help my friends deal with difficult situations that require a lot of patience. Additionally, I enjoy outdoor activities like fishing and gardening, which also require patience.

Gợi ý: 回答时态不一致，且表达不够自然，如“play phones”应为“play on my phone”。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues at crowded places like banks or supermarkets because it feels like a waste of time. To cope with this, I usually play games on my phone to distract myself and stay calm.

Gợi ý: 句子结构不够清晰，表达不够自然，如“give myself a hint”不合适，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I sometimes feel frustrated and distracted. However, I remind myself to be patient and stay focused, which helps me overcome difficulties and make progress.

Gợi ý: 存在语法错误，如“when I dealing”应为“when I am dealing”。建议注意动词形式和时态，提升表达准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, as an HR specialist, my job requires me to be patient and a good listener. For example, when I am dealing with conflicts between employees, I need to listen carefully to understand both sides and provide effective solutions.

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然，如“brought to want to have a new toy”不符合英语习惯，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: I believe I am much more patient now than when I was a child. As a kid, I was always excited and eager to get new toys, but as I have grown up, I have learned to stay calm and be more patient.

× I often help my friends should to deal with difficulties which need a lot patience.

✓ I often help my friends deal with difficulties which need a lot of patience.

动词help后面直接接动词原形，不需要使用should或to。这里应去掉should to，直接用help my friends deal。

× I often help my friends should to deal with difficulties which need a lot patience.

✓ I often help my friends deal with difficulties which need a lot of patience.

短语a lot后面需要加介词of，表示大量的耐心，缺少of是不正确的。

× When I was having a long queue in crowded places such as banks or supermarkets, it's kind of a waste of time.

✓ When I was in a long queue in crowded places such as banks or supermarkets, it was kind of a waste of time.

这里描述过去的情景，应该用过去时态。'was having a long queue'不合适，应该用'was in a long queue'。另外，后半句也应使用过去时态。

× When I was having a long queue in crowded places such as banks or supermarkets, it's kind of a waste of time.

✓ When I was in a long queue in crowded places such as banks or supermarkets, it was kind of a waste of time.

英文中排队用短语be in a queue，而不是have a queue。

× To cope with this, I often play phones to distract my attention and stay calm.

✓ To cope with this, I often play with my phone to distract my attention and stay calm.

动词play后面需要加介词with，表示玩某物。这里缺少with，且phone应为单数my phone。

× To cope with this, I often play phones to distract my attention and stay calm.

✓ To cope with this, I often play with my phone to distract my attention and stay calm.

phone前应加冠词my，表示特指自己的手机。

× I often play phones to distract my attention and stay calm.

✓ I often play with my phone to distract my attention and stay calm.

这里缺少介词with，且phone前应加物主代词my，表示自己的手机。

× I give myself a hint that I should be patient, I should stay focused and come to facing difficulties, which is a great progress.

✓ I give myself a hint that I should be patient, I should stay focused and face difficulties, which is great progress.

短语come to facing不正确，应直接用face difficulties。progress前不加冠词a。

× I give myself a hint that I should be patient, I should stay focused and come to facing difficulties, which is a great progress.

✓ I give myself a hint that I should be patient, I should stay focused and face difficulties, which is great progress.

progress是不可数名词，前面不加不定冠词a。

× For example, when I dealing with conflicts between employees, I need to be a good listener so I can understand both sides and give perfect solutions.

✓ For example, when I am dealing with conflicts between employees, I need to be a good listener so I can understand both sides and give perfect solutions.

动词deal在此处需要使用现在进行时态，缺少助动词am。

× For example, when I dealing with conflicts between employees, I need to be a good listener so I can understand both sides and give perfect solutions.

✓ For example, when I am dealing with conflicts between employees, I need to be a good listener so I can understand both sides and give perfect solutions.

缺少助动词am，导致主语和谓语不匹配。

× When I was a kid I was always excited and brought to want to have a new toy, but as I grow up, I stay calm to be patient.

✓ When I was a kid I was always excited and brought to want to have a new toy, but as I grew up, I stay calm to be patient.

描述过去的成长过程，grow应使用过去式grew。

× When I was a kid I was always excited and brought to want to have a new toy, but as I grow up, I stay calm to be patient.

✓ When I was a kid I was always excited and brought to want to have a new toy, but as I grew up, I stay calm and patient.

stay后面接形容词calm和patient，使用and连接更自然。

× When I was a kid I was always excited and brought to want to have a new toy, but as I grow up, I stay calm to be patient.

✓ When I was a kid I was always excited and brought to want to have a new toy, but as I grew up, I stay calm and patient.

brought to want不符合英语表达习惯，建议改为更自然表达，如省略或改写。