Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在自相矛盾（先说不是耐心的人，后又说是耐心的人），表达不够清晰。建议回答时保持观点一致，避免重复和矛盾，同时简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can spend a lot of time focusing on tasks. Although I was impatient as a child, I have gradually become more patient with experience.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较具体，但表达有些不自然，如“propel”用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子结构的流畅性。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I wake up late or face a tight deadline because limited time makes me anxious and stressed.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“anticipated”用法错误，句子结构复杂且不够流畅。建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇表达情感。

Ví dụ: When I work on something for a long time, I feel excited because long-term goals inspire me and give me a strong sense of achievement.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致，句子完整，并用连词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires patience because I need to handle different files and use software carefully. Losing patience can cause problems.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，如“would be more rely on my parents”不合语法。建议简化表达，注意时态和语法，清晰表达对比。

Ví dụ: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because I have grown up, learned from my mistakes, and become more mature.

× Actually, no. I think I'm a patient person.

✓ Actually, no. I don't think I'm a patient person.

句子中表达否定时，应该使用一般现在时的否定形式“don't think”，而不是肯定句“think”。

× I can spend a lot of time in what I'm going to do.

✓ I can spend a lot of time on what I'm going to do.

动词短语中介词应为“spend time on”，而不是“in”。

× But when I was a child I was very rushed and always easy to be angry.

✓ But when I was a child, I was very rushed and always easily got angry.

“easy to be angry”表达不自然，应改为副词“easily got angry”表示容易生气。

× Well actually if I get up late or something is close to the deadline, I will feel impatient because there is limited time to propel so I will feel panic and anxious.

✓ Well actually if I get up late or something is close to the deadline, I will feel impatient because there is limited time to prepare, so I will feel panic and anxious.

“propel”用词错误，应使用“prepare”表示准备。

× Well, if I have something to do for a long time, I'll definitely feel excited and anticipated because I believe that long term goal is inspiring and keep me stick to one thing for a long time which bring a huge sense of achievement.

✓ Well, if I have something to do for a long time, I'll definitely feel excited and anticipate it because I believe that a long-term goal is inspiring and keeps me sticking to one thing for a long time, which brings a huge sense of achievement.

“anticipated”应为动词“anticipate”，且“long term goal”前应加冠词“a”，动词“keep”应为第三人称单数“keeps”，动词“stick”应用动名词形式“sticking”，动词“bring”应为第三人称单数“brings”。

× Definitely my job involves taking with different files and using the software is definitely requires patience.

✓ Definitely my job involves dealing with different files and using the software definitely requires patience.

“taking with”用词错误，应为“dealing with”；“is definitely requires”中“is”多余，应去掉。

× If I lose patience and it will cause some troubles.

✓ If I lose patience, it will cause some troubles.

条件句中“if”从句和主句之间应使用逗号分隔，且“and”连接不当，应去掉。

× Definitely now I have grown up and become more mature after experiencing some difficulties in my life and also learn a lot of lessons from the past experience and mistakes in the past.

✓ Definitely now I have grown up and become more mature after experiencing some difficulties in my life and also learned a lot of lessons from past experiences and mistakes.

“learn”时态应与前文保持一致，改为过去式“learned”；“the past experience”应为复数“past experiences”，且“in the past”重复冗余。

× I would be more rely on my parents and easily got angry.

✓ I used to rely more on my parents and easily got angry.

“would be more rely”结构错误，应改为“used to rely more”；“got angry”时态应与前文一致。