Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Yes, I am kind of a patient person. However, I am trying to make myself more patient because I think patience is very important for our daily life, whatever is in our studying, walking, or even interacting with our friends or family members.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
Oh, coffee machine malfunctioning can make me feel really impatient because you need to fix it in a sleepy morning and in the meantime you have to find the instruction book which is in the corner of your house and spend a lot of time fixing it.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
Sometimes I would feel a little bit stressed and nervous when I have to do something for a long time, for example, preparing for 10/4 or else exam. It really needs a lot of concentration and during this period you may not have enough time to relax yourself while going out with your friends.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Yes of course, I am a student right now and I have a lot of essay to read and a lot of midterm exams and final exams to prepare it all. Need the patients to help me concentrate on those things for a long time and push myself to do this.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I'm more patient than when I was a child. When I was a baby, I would be impatient if I didn't get the things I want. But nowadays I think it's really calming and natural that you didn't achieve your goals. So I'm becoming more mature.
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Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构稍显复杂且有些冗长。建议使用更简洁自然的表达，避免重复，并且注意语法，如“kind of a patient person”可以简化为“I am a patient person”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am a patient person. However, I am still working on improving my patience because it is important in many aspects of daily life, such as studying, walking, and interacting with friends and family.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但句子较长且有些重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意表达的自然性，比如用“when the coffee machine malfunctions in the morning”更自然。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when the coffee machine malfunctions in the morning because I have to find the instruction manual and spend a lot of time fixing it, which is frustrating when I'm sleepy.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够连贯，且有语法错误（如“10/4 or else exam”不清晰）。建议使用连接词并明确表达，避免模糊的词汇。
Ví dụ: I sometimes feel stressed and nervous when I have to work on something for a long time, such as preparing for exams. It requires a lot of concentration, and during this period, I don't have enough time to relax or go out with friends.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“a lot of essay”应为“a lot of essays”，且句子不完整。建议注意语法，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, of course. As a student, I have many essays to read and midterm and final exams to prepare for. I need patience to concentrate on these tasks for a long time and to motivate myself to keep going.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了对比，但部分句子不够自然，如“it's really calming and natural that you didn't achieve your goals”表达不清晰。建议用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和语法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I would get impatient if I didn't get what I wanted. But now, I understand that not achieving my goals sometimes is normal, and I have become more mature.
Ngữ pháp
× I have a lot of essay to read and a lot of midterm exams and final exams to prepare it all.
✓ I have a lot of essays to read and a lot of midterm exams and final exams to prepare for.
The word 'essay' should be plural 'essays' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'prepare it all' is incorrect; it should be 'prepare for' the exams. This correction ensures proper pluralization and correct verb-preposition usage.
× Need the patients to help me concentrate on those things for a long time and push myself to do this.
✓ I need patience to help me concentrate on those things for a long time and push myself to do this.
The word 'patients' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'patience' (a noun meaning the ability to wait calmly). Also, the sentence lacks a subject 'I' and verb 'need' properly placed. This correction fixes word choice and sentence structure.
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