Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with a simple explanation. Avoid vague phrases like 'come and think myself' and 'inside my brain is very turbulent but alter'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I often take time to think carefully before reacting, even when I feel stressed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Try to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words. Provide a clear reason why being blamed makes you impatient.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when someone blames me unfairly because it makes me feel misunderstood and frustrated.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words like 'it it'.

Ví dụ: My feelings depend on the task; if the work is easy, I feel calm, but if it is difficult, I tend to get distressed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Clarify your job role and explain why it requires patience. Avoid vague phrases like 'miss a lot of people'.

Ví dụ: Yes, my job as a coordinator at the Botanical Garden requires patience because I often have to manage many visitors and solve their problems calmly.

Gợi ý: Your answer has many errors and unclear phrases like 'charred' and 'I really cry'. Try to express your idea clearly and use correct grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions better as I have grown older.

× Yeah, I am patient I guess, because I usually come and think myself so inside my brain is very turbulent but alter.

✓ Yeah, I am patient I guess, because I usually come and think to myself, so inside my brain is very turbulent but later.

The sentence lacks the preposition 'to' after 'think' which is necessary when referring to thinking to oneself. Also, 'alter' seems to be a typo and should be 'later'. The present tense is used correctly here, but the missing preposition causes confusion.

× Well what makes me feel impatient is when someone blame me because blame blame. Receiving blame from others makes me feel very.

✓ Well, what makes me feel impatient is when someone blames me because of blame. Receiving blame from others makes me feel very upset.

The verb 'blame' should be in third person singular form 'blames' to agree with 'someone'. Also, 'because blame blame' is unclear and likely incomplete; adding 'because of blame' clarifies the meaning. The sentence 'makes me feel very' is incomplete and needs an adjective like 'upset' to complete the thought.

× I think the feeling is differ from situation from situation because if the situation is easy work and not very hard it will make me feel calm but if it it is hard work I will get distressed.

✓ I think the feeling differs from situation to situation because if the situation is easy work and not very hard, it makes me feel calm, but if it is hard work, I get distressed.

The verb 'differ' should be in third person singular form 'differs' to agree with 'feeling'. The phrase 'from situation from situation' should be 'from situation to situation'. Also, tense consistency is improved by using present tense 'makes' and 'get' instead of future 'will make' and 'will get' since the statement is general.

× Yes. For example, I work as a coordinator in Alberta and because I have to miss a lot of people in the Botanical Garden, so I think yeah.

✓ Yes. For example, I work as a coordinator in Alberta and because I have to meet a lot of people in the Botanical Garden, so I think yeah.

The verb 'miss' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'meet' when referring to encountering or seeing people. The preposition usage is correct otherwise.

× Yeah, definitely. When I was charred, I was so crying, tired. But now I grew up and I really cry and I think I became more stronger than younger, younger.

✓ Yeah, definitely. When I was a child, I cried a lot and was tired. But now I have grown up, and I rarely cry. I think I have become stronger than when I was younger.

'Charred' is a typo and should be 'child'. 'Was so crying' is incorrect; past tense 'cried' is appropriate. 'I really cry' should be 'I rarely cry' to contrast past and present. 'Became more stronger' is incorrect; 'more' is unnecessary with 'stronger'. Also, 'than younger, younger' is unclear and should be 'than when I was younger'. The past tense and present perfect tense are used appropriately to describe past and current states.