Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'I always shaking my leg'는 'I am always shaking my leg'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 중복된 표현('I don't think I'm a patient person'가 두 번 반복됨)을 피하고, 더 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think I am a patient person because I often feel anxious, especially during tests, which makes me restless and fidgety.

Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 'impatient'의 의미를 잘못 사용한 것 같으니 정확한 단어 선택에 주의하세요.

Ví dụ: A stress ball helps me when I feel impatient. I bought it after seeing a member of Black Pink use one, and it really helps me stay calm.

Gợi ý: 답변이 불완전하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'I don't' 뒤에 내용이 빠져있고, 문장을 완성해야 합니다. 또한, 구체적인 이유와 예시를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I find it very hard to concentrate for a long time because my attention span is short. For example, I prefer short tests rather than long exams.

Gợi ý: 문법 오류('patients' 대신 'patience', 'have to sitting' 대신 'have to sit')를 수정하고, 답변을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, my job as a student requires patience because I have to sit and study for long hours, which can be challenging.

Gợi ý: 답변이 혼란스럽고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 문장을 명확하게 재구성하고, 자신의 의견을 분명히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 불필요한 말버릇('UMM')을 줄이고, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이세요.

Ví dụ: Of course, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions better.

× No I don't think I'm a patient person because I always feel anxiety and when I have a test I always shaking my leg so I don't think I'm patient person.

✓ No, I don't think I'm a patient person because I always feel anxious and when I have a test I am always shaking my leg, so I don't think I'm a patient person.

The word 'anxiety' is a noun, but the adjective 'anxious' should be used to describe feelings. Also, 'I always shaking' is incorrect; the verb needs the auxiliary 'am' to form the present continuous tense: 'I am always shaking'. Additionally, 'patient person' needs the article 'a' before it.

× It's a squeezy ball. I bought it because Rose buy Black Pink used a sizable and then she said it makes her impatient.

✓ It's a squeezy ball. I bought it because Rose from Black Pink used a similar one and then she said it makes her patient.

The verb 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought' to match the past action. The word 'sizable' is incorrect here; likely 'similar' is intended. Also, 'impatient' contradicts the context; 'patient' is the correct adjective.

× It is very hard to me because I don't. I can't focus on some tests for a long time, so I like short things.

✓ It is very hard for me because I can't focus on some tests for a long time, so I like short tasks.

The phrase 'hard to me' should be 'hard for me' to use the correct preposition. The incomplete sentence 'I don't.' is unclear and should be removed. 'Short things' is vague; 'short tasks' or 'short activities' is more appropriate.

× Yeah, I think my job requires me to be patient because I'm a student. I have to study and study needs patients because I have to sitting on the chair for a long time.

✓ Yeah, I think my job requires me to be patient because I'm a student. I have to study and studying needs patience because I have to sit on the chair for a long time.

The phrase 'study needs patients' is incorrect; 'studying needs patience' is correct. 'I have to sitting' should be 'I have to sit' because 'have to' is followed by the base verb. Also, 'patients' is a noun meaning sick people; 'patience' is the correct noun for tolerance.

× Of course I am when I was a child. I'm not patient more than now because I was young and. I don't like UMM doing do something wrong.

✓ Of course I was when I was a child. I'm more patient now than before because I was young and I didn't like doing something wrong.

The sentence 'I am when I was a child' mixes present and past tense; it should be 'I was when I was a child'. The phrase 'I'm not patient more than now' is incorrect; the correct comparative is 'I'm more patient now than before'. The phrase 'I don't like UMM doing do something wrong' is unclear and should be 'I didn't like doing something wrong'.