Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight awkwardness that affect naturalness. For example, 'This approach help me handle stress' should be 'This approach helps me handle stress.' Also, try to avoid minor redundancy and ensure subject-verb agreement. Using linking words like 'because' or 'so' can improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because when I face challenging situations at work, I try to stay calm and think things through carefully rather than reacting impulsively. This approach helps me to manage stress effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions, such as 'waiting in a long queues' (should be 'waiting in long queues') and 'it was my time and strapped my plan' which is unclear. Try to use clearer, more natural phrases and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to wait for something important, especially if the delay is unexpected. For instance, waiting in long queues or for public transport can be quite frustrating because it wastes my time and disrupts my plans.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences, which affect comprehension. Avoid starting with a question back to the examiner. Also, 'my construction tends to 1' is unclear and likely a mistake. Try to give a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details, using correct grammar and linking words.

Ví dụ: I usually feel quite tired and sometimes a bit bored when I have to do something for a long time. For example, if I'm working on a lengthy project or studying for hours, my concentration tends to decrease gradually.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors such as 'It's my job definitely requires' (should be 'My job definitely requires') and 'students who struggles' (should be 'students who struggle'). The last sentence 'Patient is essential to create' is incomplete and unclear. Use linking words and complete sentences to improve clarity and coherence.

Ví dụ: My job definitely requires a great deal of patience. For instance, when dealing with students who struggle to grasp certain concepts, I need to remain calm and supportive to help them improve. Patience is essential to create a positive learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but has minor grammatical errors such as 'than I was child' (should be 'than I was as a child') and sentence fragments like 'Growing up.' Try to use complete sentences and linking words to improve flow and naturalness.

Ví dụ: Of course, I'm more patient now than I was as a child. When I was growing up, I used to get frustrated easily when things didn't go my way. However, with time and experience, I have learned to stay calm and think things through carefully.

× This approach help me handle stress.

✓ This approach helps me handle stress.

The subject 'approach' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the subject.

× waiting in a long queues or for public transport can be quite frustrating because it was my time and strapped my plan.

✓ waiting in long queues or for public transport can be quite frustrating because it wastes my time and disrupts my plans.

'Queues' is plural, so 'a long queues' is incorrect; it should be 'long queues' without 'a'. Also, 'it was my time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it wastes my time'. 'Strapped my plan' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'disrupts my plans' to convey the intended meaning.

× Are you truly feel quite tired and sometimes a bit bored when I have to do something for a long time, For example, if I'm working on a lengthy project or studying for hours, my construction tends to 1.

✓ I truly feel quite tired and sometimes a bit bored when I have to do something for a long time. For example, if I'm working on a lengthy project or studying for hours, my concentration tends to wane.

The original sentence starts with 'Are you truly feel', which is incorrect question and statement mixing. It should be a statement starting with 'I truly feel'. Also, 'construction tends to 1' is unclear and likely a typo; it should be 'concentration tends to wane' to express losing focus.

× It's my job definitely requires a great deal of patience.

✓ My job definitely requires a great deal of patience.

The phrase 'It's my job definitely requires' is ungrammatical because 'It's' (it is) and 'requires' are both verbs that cannot be used together here. The correct structure is 'My job definitely requires'.

× when dealing with students who struggles to grasp certain concepts, I need to remain calm and supportive to help them improve.

✓ when dealing with students who struggle to grasp certain concepts, I need to remain calm and supportive to help them improve.

The relative clause 'who struggles' refers to 'students' which is plural, so the verb should be 'struggle' without 's' to agree with the plural subject.

× Patient is essential to create.

✓ Patience is essential to create.

'Patient' is an adjective, but the noun form 'patience' is needed here to express the concept of being patient. Also, the sentence is incomplete; it should be 'Patience is essential to create a good learning environment' or similar, but as per instruction, only grammar correction is applied.

× Of course, I'm more patient now than I was child.

✓ Of course, I'm more patient now than I was a child.

The noun 'child' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.