Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但表达略显重复且部分句子结构不够流畅。建议简化表达，避免冗余，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always listen carefully to others. For instance, when teaching my students, I patiently pay attention even if they share many things at once.

Gợi ý: 回答直接但句子结构不够自然，缺少连接词和具体细节。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并举例说明。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to repeat the same task many times, especially if it seems unnecessary, like filling out redundant forms at work.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，句子不完整且重复。建议简化句子结构，明确表达感受，并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: I usually feel stressed when I have to work on a task for a long time because it often requires careful planning and is very important.

Gợi ý: 回答未完整，句子结构不完整且缺少连接词。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often teach newcomers who have no coding experience, so I need to explain things clearly and calmly.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不流畅。建议完整叙述对比，使用连接词，并具体说明变化原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. My mother told me that I used to scream because I wanted everything immediately, but now I have learned to wait calmly.

× I always pay attention and listen carefully to what people speak and what they want to share.

✓ I always pay attention and listen carefully to what people are speaking and what they want to share.

这里描述的是正在发生的动作，应该使用动词的现在进行时形式，即动词+ing形式。

× For example, when I'm teaching my students, they tend to want to share a lot of things in one time.

✓ For example, when I'm teaching my students, they tend to want to share a lot of things at one time.

“in one time”是不正确的表达，应该用“at one time”表示“一次性”。

× I always pay attention only.

✓ I always pay attention only.

该句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× The thing that makes me feel impatient is I need to do the same task multiple times and especially when it is not really necessary.

✓ The thing that makes me feel impatient is that I need to do the same task multiple times, especially when it is not really necessary.

“is”后面缺少连接词“that”，使句子结构完整。

× I think I'll feel stressful when I have to do something for a really long time because it's something that needs to do for a long time.

✓ I think I'll feel stressed when I have to do something for a really long time because it's something that needs to be done for a long time.

“feel stressful”应为“feel stressed”，形容词用法错误；“needs to do”应为被动语态“needs to be done”。

× Maybe it's really important or it's really, really huge. Needs a lot of time to make plans and to as a.

✓ Maybe it's really important or it's really, really huge. It needs a lot of time to make plans and to act accordingly.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整；“to as a”不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Yes, I think my job needs a lot of patience because I have to teach the newcomers how to write code and sometimes the freshmen in our company they have 0 knowledge about coding, so it really.

✓ Yes, I think my job needs a lot of patience because I have to teach the newcomers how to write code and sometimes the freshmen in our company have zero knowledge about coding, so it really requires patience.

“they have”中“they”多余，主语已明确；“0”应写为“zero”；句子末尾不完整，需补充。

× Yes, I think now I'm more patient. I I always remember that my mother said when I was a child, I tend to scream all the time because I want everything immediately, but.

✓ Yes, I think now I'm more patient. I always remember that my mother said when I was a child, I tended to scream all the time because I wanted everything immediately.

“I tend”应改为过去时“I tended”，与过去时间状语一致；句子末尾“but”后缺少内容，需补充或删除。