Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to contrast your examples. For instance, use 'However' correctly to link contrasting ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'if I'm'.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For example, I am patient when waiting to see a doctor, but I tend to get impatient when standing in a long queue at the canteen.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain cause and effect clearly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to describe feelings.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to complete a task within a tight deadline because it increases my heart rate and stress levels.

Gợi ý: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly, and try to vary your vocabulary to avoid repeating words like 'tired'.

Ví dụ: I usually feel exhausted after doing something for a long time because it demands a lot of concentration.

Gợi ý: Clarify your answer with correct grammar and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh'. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'patience' instead of 'patient' when referring to the quality.

Ví dụ: As a student, I need to be patient because I have many tasks to complete and sometimes things don't go as planned.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar by using correct comparative forms and articles. Provide more specific reasons to support your answer and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned a lot and gained a better understanding of the world.

× Well, it depends on what situation is it.

✓ Well, it depends on what the situation is.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order for an indirect question. In English, indirect questions follow the statement word order, so 'what the situation is' is correct rather than 'what situation is it'.

× So if I'm waiting for CA doctor, I'm I will wait patiently.

✓ So if I'm waiting for the CA doctor, I will wait patiently.

The sentence contains a redundant 'I'm' and missing article 'the' before 'CA doctor'. Removing the extra 'I'm' and adding 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× However, if I'm if I'm like I'm waiting in the line for buying food from the canteen, I wouldn't be a patient person.

✓ However, if I'm waiting in line to buy food from the canteen, I wouldn't be a patient person.

The original sentence has repeated phrases and awkward phrasing. Simplifying to 'waiting in line to buy food' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× If I'm if I'm doing a task in a limited time, it would raise my heartbeat so it would make me feel impatient.

✓ If I'm doing a task in a limited time, it raises my heartbeat so it makes me feel impatient.

The sentence has repeated 'If I'm' and inconsistent tense usage. Removing repetition and using present tense 'raises' and 'makes' fits the conditional context better.

× I would feel tired because doing I'm doing something for a long time, it requires high concentration of it.

✓ I would feel tired because doing something for a long time requires a lot of concentration.

The original sentence has repeated phrases and awkward structure. Removing repetition and rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.

× I'm currently I'm a student so if student is a count as a job it would be patient.

✓ I'm currently a student, so if being a student counts as a job, it would require patience.

The sentence has repeated 'I'm' and incorrect preposition usage. Also, 'patient' should be 'patience' as a noun here. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy.

× It would I have to train for a patient because uh I got a lot of thing to do.

✓ I have to train to be patient because I have a lot of things to do.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Rephrasing to 'I have to train to be patient' and correcting 'thing' to 'things' makes it correct.

× Yes, compared to child of course, now is more patient than before.

✓ Yes, compared to when I was a child, I am more patient now than before.

The sentence lacks a subject and uses 'child' without an article or possessive. Adding 'when I was a child' and 'I am' clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun use.