Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Definitely, yes. I think I'm a very patient person. Uh, when I see my past, I can say I wasn't patient at all. I can't even complete uh, one task to the end, but now I'm enough patient and I can easily wait for anything to be done.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
Sometimes when I, uh, explain something to my, uh, parents or to my uh, uh, friends, uh, they can't understand. And that's why I need to explain them again and again. That's why it's, it makes me very frustrated, frustrated. That's why. And also it makes me impatient.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
In the past, when I wasn't even a little patient, I couldn't manage them and I couldn't finish a long things. But now I can spend a lot of my time for my projects or for other things without getting impatient or annoyed. Annoyed.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Actually I'm not working right now, but I can talk about my studies like my school. Actually yes, it requires patient because sometimes.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Definitely yes I am more patient than before because when I was a child I was so impatient and I was so annoying that's why no one wanted to explain something because I wasn't even listening to the end till the end that's why. But now I yes I'm so patient.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Cavabınız təbii və aydın olsa da, bəzi qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Məsələn, "I'm enough patient" ifadəsi düzgün deyil, "I'm patient enough" olmalıdır. Həmçinin, "Uh" kimi sözləri azaltmaq və cümlələri daha qısa və dəqiq etmək faydalı olar.
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a very patient person now. In the past, I struggled to finish tasks, but I have improved and can wait calmly for things to be completed.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə çoxlu təkrarlamalar və lazımsız "uh" sözləri var, bu da cavabınızı təbii olmayan edir. Daha aydın və qısa ifadələr istifadə edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi daha məntiqli edin.
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to explain things repeatedly to my parents or friends because they don't understand easily, which makes me frustrated.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Məsələn, "a long things" ifadəsi səhvdir, "long tasks" olmalıdır. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha səlis və əlaqəli etmək üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin.
Ví dụ: Previously, I struggled to complete long tasks because of impatience. However, now I can dedicate ample time to my projects without feeling annoyed or restless.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Cümlələriniz natamam və qrammatik səhvlərlə doludur. "Requires patient" ifadəsi səhvdir, "requires patience" olmalıdır. Cavabınızı tamamlamaq və daha aydın etmək üçün əlavə məlumat verin.
Ví dụ: Although I am not currently working, my studies require patience because sometimes I need to spend a lot of time understanding difficult subjects.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Cümlələriniz çox uzun və qarışıqdır, təkrarlamalar çoxdur. Daha qısa və aydın cümlələr qurun, fikirlərinizi ardıcıl və məntiqli şəkildə ifadə edin.
Ví dụ: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I was impatient and often annoyed others, but now I listen carefully and remain calm.
× I can't even complete uh, one task to the end, but now I'm enough patient and I can easily wait for anything to be done.
✓ I couldn't even complete one task to the end, but now I'm patient enough and I can easily wait for anything to be done.
The phrase 'enough patient' is incorrect because 'patient' is an adjective and 'enough' should come after the adjective it modifies. Also, 'can't' should be 'couldn't' to match the past tense context. The correct order is 'patient enough'.
× And that's why I need to explain them again and again.
✓ And that's why I need to explain to them again and again.
The verb 'explain' requires the preposition 'to' before the indirect object. Saying 'explain them' is incorrect; it should be 'explain to them'. This is a common prepositional usage error.
× I couldn't manage them and I couldn't finish a long things.
✓ I couldn't manage them and I couldn't finish long things.
The phrase 'a long things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The article should be removed to correctly modify the plural noun 'things'. Alternatively, 'a long thing' could be used if singular was intended.
× Actually yes, it requires patient because sometimes.
✓ Actually yes, it requires patience sometimes.
The word 'patient' is an adjective, but here a noun is needed to express the quality required. The correct noun form is 'patience'. Also, 'because sometimes' is incomplete; 'sometimes' alone suffices here.
× I was so annoying that's why no one wanted to explain something because I wasn't even listening to the end till the end that's why.
✓ I was so impatient that's why no one wanted to explain anything because I wasn't even listening till the end.
The adjective 'annoying' describes something that causes annoyance, but the speaker likely meant 'impatient' to describe their own behavior. Also, 'explain something' is better as 'explain anything' in this negative context. The phrase 'to the end till the end' is redundant; 'till the end' is sufficient.