Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. For example, 'patient' should be 'patience' and 'good result' should be 'good results'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a very patient person. For instance, I always work patiently even when discussions are challenging because I believe patience is essential for achieving good results. This approach helps me stay calm and focused in different situations.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some awkward expressions, such as 'it is fluctuating' and 'use my time in productivity'. Try to express your ideas more naturally and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I usually feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially in traffic jams. Moreover, my patience varies because I like to spend my time productively. For example, when I'm stuck in traffic, I find it hard to stay calm.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear, relevant, and mostly natural. To improve, you could add linking words to connect your ideas and perhaps include a specific example to enrich your response.

Ví dụ: I feel quite excited when I have to work on something for a long time, especially assignments that require a lot of effort and concentration. Additionally, I enjoy long practice sessions because they help me improve my skills and keep me motivated. For example, when preparing for exams, I dedicate several hours to studying, which boosts my confidence.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences, which affect clarity. For example, 'That's my job requires me' should be 'My job requires me', and the last sentence is incomplete. Try to complete your ideas and use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: My job requires me to be very patient because many tasks take a long time to complete. Being patient helps me stay confident and maintain concentration, which ensures I do my work accurately and efficiently. For example, when dealing with complex problems, patience allows me to think carefully and avoid mistakes.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrases, such as 'more efficient' instead of 'more patient', 'very fastly', and 'I am become amateur'. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I was eager to do things quickly without thinking much. However, now I understand the value of time and the importance of being patient in life.

× I always work patiently even when talks are very challenging because I believe patient is essential for achieving good result.

✓ I always work patiently even when tasks are very challenging because I believe patience is essential for achieving good results.

The word 'patient' is an adjective, but here a noun 'patience' is needed to express the quality. Also, 'talks' should be 'tasks' to fit the context, and 'result' should be plural 'results' to match the general meaning.

× This helps me to stay calm and focus on different situations.

✓ This helps me to stay calm and focus on different situations.

No correction needed for this sentence.

× Apart from that, it is fluctuating because I like to use my time in productivity.

✓ Apart from that, it fluctuates because I like to use my time productively.

The phrase 'it is fluctuating' is awkward; 'it fluctuates' is better. Also, 'use my time in productivity' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'use my time productively' using the adverb form.

× For example, when I am stuck in traffic, I find it hard to stay calm.

✓ For example, when I am stuck in traffic, I find it hard to stay calm.

No correction needed for this sentence.

× That's my job requires me to be very patient because many tasks take a long time to complete.

✓ My job requires me to be very patient because many tasks take a long time to complete.

The phrase 'That's my job requires' is incorrect; 'My job requires' is the correct form to start the sentence.

× Being patient helps me stay confident and maintain concentration which ensure I do my work accurately and efficiently.

✓ Being patient helps me stay confident and maintain concentration which ensures I do my work accurately and efficiently.

The verb 'ensure' should be 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'concentration'.

× For example, when dealing with complex problem patient allow me to think carefully and avoid.

✓ For example, when dealing with complex problems, patience allows me to think carefully and avoid mistakes.

'Problem' should be plural 'problems' to match the context. 'Patient' should be 'patience' (noun), and the verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular noun 'patience'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'mistakes' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, definitely I am more efficient as compared to my childhood life because that time I was very excited to do anything very fastly.

✓ Yes, definitely I am more efficient compared to my childhood because at that time I was very excited to do anything very fast.

The word 'fastly' is not a correct adverb; 'fast' is both adjective and adverb. Also, 'as compared to' is better simplified to 'compared to'. 'Childhood life' is better as 'childhood'. 'That time' should be 'at that time'.

× So now I I am become amateur and I know value of time and everything which is very important for our life.

✓ So now I have become more mature and I know the value of time and everything which is very important for our life.

The phrase 'I I am become amateur' is incorrect; it should be 'I have become more mature'. 'Know value of time' needs the article 'the' before 'value'. 'Amateur' is not appropriate here; 'more mature' fits the intended meaning. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.