Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够自然流畅，存在重复和语法错误，且表达较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达自己的观点。

Ví dụ: I am not a very patient person. When I have to do things quickly, I often feel nervous and stressed because my schedule is very tight.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议用简单明了的句子表达原因，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient mostly when I have a tight schedule and difficult tasks. If I have to finish something quickly and it is hard, I get stressed and upset.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但表达中有语法错误和重复。建议注意句子结构，避免双重否定，使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

Ví dụ: It depends on the task. If I am interested in it, I enjoy doing it for a long time. However, if I dislike the task, I become impatient and upset.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够简洁。建议简化句子，注意名词单复数和冠词的使用，表达更准确。

Ví dụ: I am a student and have not worked yet. However, I think patience is important in studying because learning requires time and effort.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚表达对比和变化。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes. When I was a child, I used to get nervous and impatient easily. But in recent years, I have learned to be more patient with different situations I face.

× I need to know more about the knowledges.

✓ I need to know more about knowledge.

“knowledge”是不可数名词，不能加复数形式“knowledges”。应使用单数形式。

× When I was a child I will be nervous except for everything for impatient.

✓ When I was a child I was nervous about everything and impatient.

句子描述过去的情况，应使用过去时态“was”，而不是将来时“will be”。

× But in recent years I've been learned how to be more patient to everything I encounter and the thing I need to the situation I need to face.

✓ But in recent years I've learned how to be more patient with everything I encounter and the situations I need to face.

“have been learned”结构错误，应为现在完成时“have learned”。另外，“patient to”应改为“patient with”，介词使用错误。