Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误，并使表达更自然流畅。可以简洁直接地表达观点，避免冗长和不必要的细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, but I do get annoyed when my phone takes too long to load.

Gợi ý: 回答中应注意语法和时态一致，使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when people around me are impatient because their mood tends to affect me, which makes me upset and frustrated.

Gợi ý: 回答应避免重复表达，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I feel relaxed when I do something for a long time, like solving puzzles, because I enjoy the process step by step and it brings me pleasure.

Gợi ý: 回答中应注意语法正确，句子完整，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because Chinese painting involves drawing step by step and completing each part carefully to create the whole artwork.

Gợi ý: 回答应注意时态一致，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because my major requires carefulness and patience, which has helped me become calmer and more patient.

× Yes, usually I am a patient person except when I see the loads on my phone it makes me annoyed.

✓ Yes, usually I am a patient person except when I see the load on my phone; it makes me annoyed.

这里的“loads”应为单数“load”，因为指的是手机上的负载（负荷）整体，而不是多个负载。复数形式不符合语境。

× When someone around me present a feeling that she or he is impatient, I will feel impatient too because this sense of feeling can come back to me easily, which made me feel upset and frustrated.

✓ When someone around me presents a feeling that she or he is impatient, I will feel impatient too because this sense of feeling can come back to me easily, which makes me feel upset and frustrated.

动词“present”应使用第三人称单数形式“presents”，因为主语是单数“someone”。此外，“made”应改为现在时“makes”，与前文时态保持一致。

× I feel relaxed and I just enjoy doing something for a long time, for example doing a puzzle, because it can make me feel relaxed when doing such kind of thing step by step and it gives me a pleasure.

✓ I feel relaxed and I just enjoy doing something for a long time, for example doing a puzzle, because it can make me feel relaxed when doing such kinds of things step by step and it gives me pleasure.

“such kind of thing”应改为复数形式“such kinds of things”，因为指的是多种类似的事情。同时，“a pleasure”应去掉冠词，直接用“pleasure”，表示抽象名词。

× Yes, it require me to be patient because my major is Chinese painting and you know painting just need a lot of patience and you need to draw step by step and finish everything in order so that the whole.

✓ Yes, it requires me to be patient because my major is Chinese painting and you know painting just needs a lot of patience and you need to draw step by step and finish everything in order so that the whole.

“require”应改为第三人称单数形式“requires”，因为主语是单数“it”。“need”也应改为“needs”，因为主语是单数“painting”。

× I think definitely because when I was a child I'm very impatient and I was easy to get annoyed by the surrounding.

✓ I think definitely because when I was a child I was very impatient and I was easily annoyed by the surroundings.

“I'm”应改为过去时“was”，因为描述过去的状态。“easy to get annoyed”应改为“easily annoyed”，更符合表达习惯。“surrounding”应为复数“surroundings”，表示周围环境。

× But now I am more patient because of my majors that requires a lot of patience and carefulness so I'm quieter and more patient.

✓ But now I am more patient because of my major that requires a lot of patience and carefulness so I'm quieter and more patient.

“majors”应为单数“major”，因为指的是一个专业。动词“requires”与单数主语“major”一致。