Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I never give up easily and I am good at persisting with tasks.

Gợi ý: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。具体的な状況を明確に説明し、論理的に話を展開する練習が必要です。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I face opposition, like during the school festival when some teachers disagreed with my ideas, but I stayed determined and succeeded.

Gợi ý: 表現が不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。感情を明確に述べ、理由や対処法を具体的に説明することが大切です。

Ví dụ: I sometimes feel bored when doing something for a long time, but I try to think about enjoyable things to keep my motivation high.

Gợi ý: 文が不完全で繰り返しが多く、意味が不明瞭です。簡潔で明確な文を作り、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, being a student requires patience because studying can be boring, but it is important to keep learning consistently.

Gợi ý: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。過去と現在の比較を明確にし、具体的な変化を説明する練習が必要です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to cry easily, but now I can wait and keep trying without giving up.

× Things and I really good at keep doing something, so I think I am a party in person.

✓ Things and I are really good at keeping doing something, so I think I am a patient person.

The verb 'keep' should be followed by the gerund form 'keeping' to indicate continuous action. Also, 'party' is a typo and should be 'patient'.

× Things and I really good at keep doing something, so I think I am a party in person.

✓ Things and I are really good at keeping doing something, so I think I am a patient person.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' to link the subject and predicate. Also, 'Things and I' is awkward; likely the student meant 'I am really good at...'.

× I think that occurred when I had my can make something because, uh, like at the school festival, some, some teachers, uh, opposed me, but I never gave up and I succeeded.

✓ I think that happened when I was making something, because, uh, like at the school festival, some teachers opposed me, but I never gave up and I succeeded.

The phrase 'had my can make something' is incorrect; it should be 'was making something' to indicate past continuous action. 'Occurred' is better replaced with 'happened' for naturalness.

× I'm maybe boring, a few boring, but I I think I will think about something fun because if I think about funny things I my motivation can be.

✓ I might get bored a little, but I think I will think about something fun because if I think about funny things, my motivation can increase.

'I'm maybe boring' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I might get bored'. Also, 'I my motivation can be' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'my motivation can increase'.

× Yes, because I'm a student. We need to we always be needed to studying study so but study is often boring, so we need to we require.

✓ Yes, because I'm a student. We always need to study, but studying is often boring, so we need to be patient.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect phrases like 'we need to we always be needed to studying study'. The correct form is 'we always need to study'. Also, 'require' is incorrectly used; 'need to be patient' fits better.

× Yes I agree it because when I was child I I was so crying. People always cry because I can't passionate but nowadays I can waiting or keep doing so I glued up.

✓ Yes, I agree because when I was a child, I used to cry a lot. People always cried because I wasn't passionate, but nowadays I can wait and keep going, so I have grown up.

'I was so crying' is incorrect; the past habitual action is expressed as 'I used to cry a lot'. 'I can't passionate' is incorrect; it should be 'I wasn't passionate'. 'I can waiting' should be 'I can wait'. 'I glued up' is a wrong phrase; the correct expression is 'I have grown up'.