Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I'm not very patient. When I was a young kid and my mom and dad took me out to a shopping mall, I was asking when we were there since the moment we went out of our house. So actually this shows that I'm not very patient.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
I actually believe that patience is decided from the time that people are born. So I already gave the example about when I was a younger kid and this actually means what your personality is when you're born continues on yourself after you grow up.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
I would feel exhausted if you were to told me that I had to do something for a very long time. For instance, recently I was writing my debate constructive speech and after I've done it for only two hours, which is already a long time for me, I felt exhausted and tired and wanted just to sleep.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
My job actually does require myself to be patient. My job as a student is to sit inside the classroom and get information from the teacher. And we all know that not every teacher can make the lesson fun. So this means that when the information is not entertaining, I should also be patient and learn.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I believe that I am more patient now than when I was a child. This is primarily because I have become more sensible and can make more rational decisions. So this means that I have more common sense and can make decisions to when to be patient or not.
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Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I'm not very patient. For example, when I was a child, I would constantly ask my parents how long it would take to arrive at the shopping mall, which shows my impatience.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体，且表达不够清晰，建议直接说明让你感到不耐烦的具体原因，并用连接词组织语言。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time without knowing how long it will take, because uncertainty makes me anxious.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较具体，但句子结构有些混乱，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I feel exhausted when I have to do something for a long time. For example, I recently spent two hours writing a debate speech, and I felt very tired afterwards.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整，但部分表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, my job as a student requires patience. Sometimes, lessons are not very interesting, but I still need to pay attention and learn.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达较好，但部分句子略显重复，建议简化语言并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have become more sensible and can decide when to be patient.
Ngữ pháp
× I was asking when we were there since the moment we went out of our house.
✓ I was asking when we would be there since the moment we went out of our house.
这里的时态使用不正确，'was asking'后面应该用将来时态表达期待的动作，故用'would be'。
× My job actually does require myself to be patient.
✓ My job actually does require me to be patient.
'require'后面应接宾格代词，不能用反身代词'myself'。
× So this means that I have more common sense and can make decisions to when to be patient or not.
✓ So this means that I have more common sense and can make decisions about when to be patient or not.
'decisions'后面应接介词'about'，而不是'to'。
× I believe that patience is decided from the time that people are born.
✓ I believe that patience is determined from the time that people are born.
'decided'用法不当，'patience'更适合用被动语态'determined'表示被决定。
× I would feel exhausted if you were to told me that I had to do something for a very long time.
✓ I would feel exhausted if you were to tell me that I had to do something for a very long time.
'were to told'中'told'应为动词原形'tell'，因为情态结构后接动词原形。
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