Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够简洁且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，避免重复和冗余，使用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: I don't consider myself very patient, but my friends often say I listen carefully and help them solve their problems.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少具体细节。建议明确列举让你不耐烦的具体事物，并用连词连接句子。

Ví dụ: I usually feel impatient when I hear crying children on the highway or when my roommates argue loudly.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且含糊，缺乏逻辑和具体内容。建议直接回答问题，表达清楚自己的感受，并用连词连接。

Ví dụ: I usually feel a bit tired when I have to do something for a long time, but I try to stay patient and focused.

Gợi ý: 回答有语法错误且表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明工作内容和耐心的重要性，使用正确的时态和句子结构。

Ví dụ: Although I am a student, I have worked part-time teaching English to children, which requires a lot of patience.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态混用且表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态，清楚地比较过去和现在的耐心程度，并给出具体例子。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes. When I was a child, I was very impatient and sometimes said bad words when I was angry. But now, I have learned to control my emotions better.

× I am a very patient and general girl

✓ I am a very patient and gentle girl

这里的形容词“general”用错了，应该用“gentle”表示温和的意思。'general'意为一般的，不符合语境。

× I can hear them hear their words carefully

✓ I can hear them carefully

句子中“hear them hear their words”重复且冗余，应简化为“hear them carefully”，避免重复。

× the chorus between our our roommates and the.

✓ the quarrel between our roommates.

“chorus”用错了，应该是“quarrel”（争吵），且“our our”重复，句子不完整，应删去多余部分并补全。

× I will feel disturbing, but sorry I don't uh.

✓ I will feel disturbed, but sorry, I don't.

“feel disturbing”错误，应该用过去分词“disturbed”表示感到困扰；另外句子结构不完整，需调整。

× One of my job was to tea taught students English.

✓ One of my jobs was to teach students English.

“One of my job”应为复数“jobs”，且“tea taught”是错误拼写，应为“teach”。

× when you are face some kids you need to be very patient.

✓ when you face some kids you need to be very patient.

“are face”错误，正确用法是“face”，动词不需要被动形式。

× When I was a child, I am very impatient.

✓ When I was a child, I was very impatient.

时间状语“when I was a child”表示过去，谓语动词应使用过去时“was”。

× when other child came to talk with me, if I am angry about their words, I will be very impatient

✓ when other children came to talk with me, if I was angry about their words, I would be very impatient

“other child”应为复数“other children”；时态应统一为过去时，条件句中用过去时态。

× However, when now I'm I don't know.

✓ However, now I don't know.

句子结构混乱，“when now I'm”不合语法，应删去“when”并调整顺序。