Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为简单且有重复（"find a way to find it"），语言不够自然流畅。建议避免重复表达，使用更地道的表达方式，并且回答可以更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when I lose my phone, I calmly retrace my steps and systematically check all possible places until I find it.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误（"got a look"不明确），表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，避免模糊或错误的短语，并且补充更多细节。

Ví dụ: A heavy study load makes me feel impatient. For example, last term I had an Advanced Accounting course that was very challenging, and I often stayed up until 2 AM trying to understand the material.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇（"energy energy"），语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复，并且使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: At first, I feel confident and energetic when doing something for a long time, but eventually I get very tired and lose the motivation to continue.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不合适的词汇（"which finger is wrong"），表达不清晰且不自然。建议使用更准确的专业词汇，避免错误的比喻或表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, patience is essential in accounting because I often have to carefully analyze data to identify and correct errors.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但表达可以更自然，"think twice to do that"不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并补充具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Previously, I made decisions impulsively, but now I take time to think carefully before acting.

× I can solve a problem of of losing my phone and I can find a way to find it easily.

✓ I can solve a problem of losing my phone and I can find a way to find it easily.

句子中出现了重复的介词“of of”，这是多余的，应删除一个。

× I stayed up late to 2:00 AM and got a look.

✓ I stayed up late until 2:00 AM and got a look.

“to 2:00 AM”应改为“until 2:00 AM”，表示持续到某个时间点。

× At first I'm confident and willing to do with energy energy but I will find it really tired and don't have the power to do anymore.

✓ At first I'm confident and willing to do it with energy, but I find it really tiring and don't have the power to do it anymore.

“willing to do with energy energy”缺少宾语且“energy”重复，应补充宾语“it”，并去掉重复词。动词“find”后应接形容词“tiring”而非形容词“tired”。

× I usually cope with the statistics and find out which finger is wrong and cracked it with great patience.

✓ I usually cope with the statistics and find out which figure is wrong and fix it with great patience.

“finger”应为“figure”，表示数字；“cracked it”用词不当，应改为“fix it”，表示修正错误。

× In the past I made decisions following my heart, but now I will think twice to do that.

✓ In the past I made decisions following my heart, but now I think twice before doing that.

“now”表示现在时，不能用“will think”，应改为一般现在时“think”，且“to do that”应改为“before doing that”更符合习惯表达。