Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Oh to be honest or I'm not sure why re patient person because I don't like if I have to write so you are like quickly.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
Oh I single or waiting for a long time or where make me lost my patience. Oh because the I think The thing is just a waste of my time and all this time or I can do other things.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
Oh, I may feel very frustrated and depression or an evil or little longer. I think of my time and I want to leave quickly.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Oh no. Oh, because I'm all postgraduate students is about so my academic research it or somewhere like a tool and I think always make me feel happy and relaxed.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Oh, of course. Of course. Of course, of course, of course.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和表达存在较多错误,建议简洁明了地直接回答问题,并避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in difficult situations.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不连贯,表达不清晰,建议使用连词使句子更流畅,并具体说明原因。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time because I think it wastes my time that I could use more productively.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达混乱,词汇使用不当,建议用准确的词汇表达情绪,并保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: I usually feel frustrated and bored when I have to do something for a long time because it feels like a waste of time.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够明确,语法错误较多,建议直接回答问题并简洁说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, my job as a postgraduate student mainly involves academic research, which I enjoy and find relaxing, so it doesn't require much patience.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简单且重复,建议给出具体理由或例子来支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions better over time.
× Oh to be honest or I'm not sure why re patient person because I don't like if I have to write so you are like quickly.
✓ Oh, to be honest, I'm not sure why I'm a patient person because I don't like to wait and I want things to happen quickly.
句子结构混乱,缺少连贯性。需要调整句子顺序和连接词,使表达更清晰。
× Oh I single or waiting for a long time or where make me lost my patience.
✓ Oh, waiting for a long time makes me lose my patience.
使用了错误的单复数形式和不正确的动词形式,需将主语和动词形式统一。
× Oh because the I think The thing is just a waste of my time and all this time or I can do other things.
✓ Oh, because I think it is just a waste of my time, and during this time I could do other things.
动词形式使用不当,句子缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配,需调整动词形式和句子结构。
× Oh, I may feel very frustrated and depression or an evil or little longer.
✓ Oh, I may feel very frustrated and depressed if it lasts a little longer.
形容词和名词使用错误,'depression'应为形容词形式'depressed',且句子缺少连词和完整结构。
× I think of my time and I want to leave quickly.
✓ I think about my time and I want to leave quickly.
介词使用错误,'think of'和'think about'含义不同,此处应使用'think about'。
× Oh no. Oh, because I'm all postgraduate students is about so my academic research it or somewhere like a tool and I think always make me feel happy and relaxed.
✓ Oh no. Oh, because I'm a postgraduate student, and my academic research is like a tool that always makes me feel happy and relaxed.
代词使用错误,单复数不一致,句子结构混乱,需调整代词和句子结构。