Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，保持句子简洁且连贯。建议使用完整句子直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: I am not a very patient person because I often get distracted easily. For example, when I try to study, I sometimes start playing games or chatting with my friends, which makes it hard to focus.

Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误，使用连贯的句子表达原因和感受。建议用具体情境说明导致不耐烦的原因。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to deal with difficult tasks that take a long time. Also, if someone is rude or impatient with me, it affects my mood and makes me feel more impatient.

Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理，避免语法错误，清楚表达不同情境下的感受。建议用连贯句子描述喜欢和不喜欢的活动。

Ví dụ: It depends on the activity. If I enjoy it, like going to the cinema or singing with friends, I feel happy even if it takes a long time. But if the task is difficult, like complex homework, I feel bored and want to give up.

Gợi ý: 回答应完整且语法正确，清楚说明为什么工作需要耐心。建议用连贯句子描述作为学生需要耐心的具体原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job as a student requires patience because I have to solve many problems and write essays carefully. I often need to check and correct my work several times, which takes time and patience.

Gợi ý: 回答应避免语法错误，表达完整，清楚比较现在和过去的耐心程度。建议用连贯句子说明变化和原因。

Ví dụ: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Before, I would get distracted easily, like chatting with friends right after finishing homework. But now, I can focus better and handle tasks more patiently.

× I easily distract my attention to some. Other things like play games or chat with daughters.

✓ I easily distract my attention to some other things like playing games or chatting with my daughters.

这里'some other things'后面应该用动名词形式表示动作，且'daughters'前应加上物主代词'my'，表示所有关系。

× Ann, I think focus on one things is very difficult.

✓ Ann, I think focusing on one thing is very difficult.

'one things'中'one'表示单数，'things'应改为单数形式'thing'，且'focus on'后应使用动名词形式'Focusing'。

× because I need spend much time on it

✓ because I need to spend much time on it

'need'后面接动词时应加不定式'to'，即'need to spend'。

× someone is implied or impatient to me because it will change my mood.

✓ someone is implied or impatient with me because it will change my mood.

'impatient'后应接介词'with'，且'someone is implied'表达不清，应改为'someone is impatient with me'。

× someone is implied or impatient to me because it will change my mood.

✓ someone is implied or impatient with me because it will change my mood.

'impatient'后应使用介词'with'而非'to'。

× I think these things will give me ignore and bad emotions so I will feel impatient.

✓ I think these things will make me ignore and feel bad emotions, so I will feel impatient.

'give me ignore'表达不正确，应改为'make me ignore'或'cause me to ignore'，且'bad emotions'前应加动词'feel'。

× Well it depends if there's things is what I love and what I want to like.

✓ Well, it depends if there are things that I love and want to like.

'there's things'中'things'为复数，谓语应使用'are'，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× I very love to do it.

✓ I really love to do it.

'very love'用法错误，应使用副词'really'修饰动词'love'。

× But if these things are hard and difficult to make it like 2 homework and too complex tags with friends is ignore.

✓ But if these things are hard and difficult to do, like two homework assignments and too complex tasks with friends, I ignore them.

'2 homework'应为'two homework assignments'，'tags'应为'tasks'，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× I need patient to deal with many problems in my task and I need patient to write a good easy before many times check and. Correct.

✓ I need patience to deal with many problems in my tasks, and I need patience to write a good essay after checking and correcting many times.

'need patient'应改为'need patience'，'easy'应为'essay'，句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× I need to have patient to something.

✓ I need to have patience for something.

'patient'应为名词'patience'，且介词应为'for'。

× When I was a kid I was very easy to be distracted by other things like.

✓ When I was a kid, I was very easily distracted by other things like...

'easy'应为副词'easily'修饰动词'distracted'。

× When I finished my homework my friends chat with me and I will put my hunger away and chat with them.

✓ When I finished my homework, my friends chatted with me and I would put my hunger aside and chat with them.

时态应保持一致，'chat'应为过去式'chatted'，'put my hunger away'表达不自然，改为'put my hunger aside'更合适。

× But now my brain is developed an I think I'm more patient to everything every everyone is a good things but I still need to.

✓ But now my brain has developed and I think I'm more patient with everything and everyone, which is a good thing, but I still need to improve.

'brain is developed'应为'brain has developed'，'patient to'应为'patient with'，'good things'应为'singular good thing'，句子需补充完整。