Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和无关内容，注意时态和句子结构。

Ví dụ: No, I am not a patient person because I tend to do things quickly. However, my grandmother is very patient and hardworking.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议用完整句子表达原因，并用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I face difficult tasks or questions, especially in my history studies because I have to read many books and remember a lot of information.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不准确，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议明确表达感受，使用具体例子，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: I usually feel bored when I have to do something for a long time. However, it depends on the activity. For example, I enjoy watching long movies, but reading history books can be tiring.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，结构清晰，使用恰当的词汇表达观点。

Ví dụ: I don't have a job because I am a student. However, being a student requires a lot of patience, especially when studying many books and preparing for exams.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯性。建议完整表达观点，说明原因，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have ADHD. When I was younger, I found it hard to concentrate and finish reading books, but now I can focus better.

× After day I'm not a patient person and I always do everything very quickly and then.

✓ After a day, I'm not a patient person and I always do everything very quickly.

这里缺少冠词“a”，应为“After a day”，表示“一天之后”。另外，句尾的“and then”不完整，应去掉。

× She come and do our do many hard working man.

✓ She comes and does our work; she is a very hardworking woman.

动词“come”和“do”在第三人称单数时应加-s，变为“comes”和“does”。另外，句子结构混乱，需调整表达。

× Oh starting to make me feel impatient.

✓ Oh, it is starting to make me feel impatient.

“starting”作为现在分词需要有助动词“is”构成现在进行时，缺少“is”导致语法错误。

× It means I need to read lots of book and I remember money now.

✓ It means I need to read lots of books and remember many now.

“book”应为复数“books”，表示“许多书”。“money”应为“many”，表示“许多”。

× Maybe I will feel boring, but I think it should to choose the different different situation.

✓ Maybe I will feel bored, but I think it depends on different situations.

“boring”是形容事物的，描述人的感受应使用“bored”。“should to choose”结构错误，应改为“depends on”。

× For example, when I watch a long boy, maybe I will have a great passion to finish it.

✓ For example, when I watch a long movie, maybe I will have a great passion to finish it.

“boy”应为“movie”，语义错误。

× But if I should read the history books, maybe I will feel.

✓ But if I have to read the history books, maybe I will feel bored.

“should”用法不当，表达义务应使用“have to”。句尾不完整，需补充感受。

× I'm sorry not how I don't have a job in my university, but I think if you are student you need alot.

✓ I'm sorry, no, I don't have a job at my university, but I think if you are a student you need a lot.

“not how”错误，应为“no”。“alot”应为“a lot”。缺少冠词“a”。

× You need to be patient. For example you should too are a lot of books and and to remember many knowledge in your.

✓ You need to be patient. For example, you should read a lot of books and remember much knowledge for your exams.

“should too are”错误，应为“should read”。“many knowledge”应为“much knowledge”。“in your”不完整，应补充“for your exams”。

× I think now I'm more patient than I was a child because I have ADHD in so when I child I can't read the whole book.

✓ I think now I'm more patient than I was as a child because I have ADHD, so when I was a child I couldn't read the whole book.

“when I child”缺少“was a”，时态应为过去时，“can't”应为“couldn't”。

× Sometimes I do these things or I do the things and my mother always saying I don't have a.

✓ Sometimes I do these things or other things, and my mother is always saying I don't have patience.

句子不完整，缺少宾语“patience”。“always saying”应为“is always saying”。