PatiencePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you a patient person?

Thí sinh

Yes, I'm a patient person. I usually do things. Patiently and.

Giám khảo

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Thí sinh

Well, making me feel impatient. Let me think about it. It must be something really urgent.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Thí sinh

Well, I have to do something. For a long time I usually feel a little impatient and anxious.

Giám khảo

Does your job require you to be patient?

Thí sinh

Actually I'm a student now. And I still have to be patient for my studies for example. Study for an exam. I have to be patient and stay focused just to make preparations.

Giám khảo

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I'm more patient now than when I was a child. When I'm growing up, I have to. Do a lot of things and. Provide a sense of responsibility.

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Part 1

Are you a patient person?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,句子结构不完整,且有语法错误。建议练习完整表达,避免断句,使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually take my time to complete tasks carefully and without rushing.

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,表达不完整且缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题,并用连词连接句子,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when something urgent happens that requires immediate attention, especially if I have to wait or delay my plans.

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中断句过多,影响流畅性。建议合并句子,使用连接词,并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel a bit impatient and anxious because I want to finish quickly and move on to other tasks.

Does your job require you to be patient?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但句子较短且重复。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句式,避免重复。

Ví dụ: Although I am currently a student, my studies require a great deal of patience, especially when preparing for exams, as I need to stay focused and manage my time effectively.

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中断句严重,表达不完整。建议练习连贯表达,使用完整句子,并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because as I have grown up, I have taken on more responsibilities which require me to be calm and persistent.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× I usually do things. Patiently and.

I usually do things patiently.

句子结构不完整,'Patiently and' 是不完整的短语,应与前句合并形成完整句子。建议将其合并为'I usually do things patiently.',使句子通顺完整。

Sentence structure errors

× Well, making me feel impatient.

Well, what makes me feel impatient?

句子缺少主语和谓语,导致结构不完整。应补充完整句子,表达清楚意思。建议改为'Well, what makes me feel impatient?'。

Sentence structure errors

× For a long time I usually feel a little impatient and anxious.

When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel a little impatient and anxious.

原句缺少时间状语从句,导致表达不清晰。应补充时间状语,使句子完整通顺。

Sentence structure errors

× Actually I'm a student now. And I still have to be patient for my studies for example.

Actually, I'm a student now, and I still have to be patient with my studies, for example.

句子断裂,连接词使用不当,且介词使用错误。应将句子合并,使用正确介词'with',使表达更自然。

Sentence structure errors

× Study for an exam.

I study for an exam.

句子缺少主语,导致不完整。应补充主语,使句子完整。

Sentence structure errors

× When I'm growing up, I have to. Do a lot of things and. Provide a sense of responsibility.

When I was growing up, I had to do a lot of things and develop a sense of responsibility.

句子断裂,时态错误。应使用过去时态,合并断句,使句子完整且时态一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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