Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Not really. Sometimes I am a good person person or sometime I am locked. Because some reason for. Me too thing that.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
It includes something from my own thought and something from. Surrounding me and for example lack of time. Something like that.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
I would I would say is that, UM, sucking your consumer time main task or long Julie to do sucked *** and I feel. Concentrate on stock charts because it take times to lose.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Definitely eat because my job, he says about treating it really, really required patient because trading in not for short term but long term.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Sure, I would say that the time passed and I have I have several ways to be based in. Now then, the past. Uh.
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Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích hoặc đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.
Ví dụ: I am not very patient. Sometimes I get frustrated when things don't go as planned, especially if I have to wait for a long time.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn còn chung chung và thiếu cụ thể. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ rõ ràng về nguyên nhân khiến bạn thiếu kiên nhẫn.
Ví dụ: I feel impatient mainly because of time pressure and distractions around me. For example, when I have many tasks to finish but not enough time, I get frustrated.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp hoặc lặp lại.
Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel tired and sometimes bored. However, I try to stay focused to complete the task efficiently.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi phát âm và giải thích rõ hơn về yêu cầu kiên nhẫn trong công việc của bạn.
Ví dụ: Definitely yes. My job requires a lot of patience because trading is a long-term process and I need to wait for the right opportunities.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể về sự thay đổi của bản thân qua thời gian.
Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions and understand situations better.
Ngữ pháp
× Sometimes I am a good person person or sometime I am locked.
✓ Sometimes I am a good person or sometimes I am locked.
The word 'person' was repeated unnecessarily and 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Person person' is incorrect pluralization and repetition.
× Because some reason for. Me too thing that.
✓ Because of some reason. I also think that.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Because some reason for' is incomplete; it should be 'Because of some reason'. 'Me too thing that' is incorrect and should be 'I also think that'.
× It includes something from my own thought and something from. Surrounding me and for example lack of time.
✓ It includes something from my own thoughts and something from my surroundings, for example, lack of time.
The sentence is fragmented and missing articles and prepositions. 'Surrounding me' should be 'my surroundings'. Also, 'thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to match context.
× I would I would say is that, UM, sucking your consumer time main task or long Julie to do sucked *** and I feel.
✓ I would say that it sucks your consumer time; the main task or long duty to do is exhausting, and I feel...
The original sentence is unclear and fragmented. 'Sucking your consumer time' is awkward; 'it sucks your consumer time' is better. 'Long Julie' seems a mishearing of 'long duty'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.
× Concentrate on stock charts because it take times to lose.
✓ Concentrate on stock charts because it takes time to lose.
The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Times' should be singular 'time' in this context.
× Definitely eat because my job, he says about treating it really, really required patient because trading in not for short term but long term.
✓ Definitely yes, because my job requires treating it with patience; trading is not for the short term but the long term.
'Eat' is incorrect and should be 'yes'. 'He says about treating it' is unclear and should be 'requires treating it with patience'. 'Required patient' should be 'requires patience'. Subject-verb agreement errors are present.
× Sure, I would say that the time passed and I have I have several ways to be based in. Now then, the past.
✓ Sure, I would say that time has passed and I have several ways to be patient now compared to the past.
'The time passed' should be 'time has passed' to indicate present perfect tense. 'Be based in' is incorrect; it should be 'be patient'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction.
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