Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Well, I think I'm patient person at certain conditions. For example, when I'm teaching child, I usually pay patient to them.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
Well, when I'm talking to someone who has a bad listening skill, they usually ask me to repeat the questions once more time and that's when I'm impatient.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
Well, when I have to do something for a long time, I usually break it down to smaller steps and then I will do each part step by step and patiently.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think my job required me to be patient because I usually have to deal with some sophisticated problems and to talk to some difficult person.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, while I am growing up, something in the society has taught me to be patient.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如缺少冠词和动词形式错误,且表达不够自然。建议注意冠词的使用(a patient person),动词形式(pay attention),并使句子更流畅自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person in certain situations. For example, when I am teaching children, I usually pay close attention to their needs.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如单复数不一致(listening skill应为listening skills),以及表达不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I talk to someone who has poor listening skills and asks me to repeat myself multiple times.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好,但句子稍显冗长且结尾用词不当(patiently应放在动词前)。建议简化句子并调整词序,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually break it down into smaller steps and complete each part patiently.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态错误(required应为require),单复数错误(person应为people),表达不够自然。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用,并丰富词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I often have to deal with complex problems and communicate with difficult people.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当(while I am growing up应为as I have grown up),表达模糊且不具体。建议使用正确时态并具体说明原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have become more patient as I have grown up because life experiences and society have taught me the importance of patience.
× Well, I think I'm patient person at certain conditions.
✓ Well, I think I'm a patient person under certain conditions.
这里缺少冠词'a',因为'patient person'是单数可数名词,前面需要加不定冠词。'at certain conditions'应改为'under certain conditions',但根据题目只纠正语法问题,冠词错误属于语法问题。
× Well, I think I'm patient person at certain conditions.
✓ Well, I think I'm a patient person under certain conditions.
介词'at'用法不当,描述条件时应使用'under'。
× For example, when I'm teaching child, I usually pay patient to them.
✓ For example, when I'm teaching children, I usually pay attention to them.
'child'应为复数形式'children',属于单复数错误;'pay patient'用法错误,应为'pay attention',这里纠正为正确表达。
× For example, when I'm teaching child, I usually pay patient to them.
✓ For example, when I'm teaching children, I usually pay attention to them.
'child'应为复数形式'children',因为后面用的是'them',指复数。
× For example, when I'm teaching child, I usually pay patient to them.
✓ For example, when I'm teaching children, I usually pay attention to them.
'pay patient'是错误搭配,应使用'pay attention',表示'注意'。
× when I'm talking to someone who has a bad listening skill, they usually ask me to repeat the questions once more time
✓ when I'm talking to someone who has bad listening skills, they usually ask me to repeat the question one more time
'listening skill'应为复数'listening skills',因为通常指多项技能;'questions'应为单数'question',因为重复的是一个问题;'once more time'表达错误,应为'one more time'。
× they usually ask me to repeat the questions once more time
✓ they usually ask me to repeat the question one more time
'once more time'用法错误,正确表达为'one more time'。
× I usually break it down to smaller steps and then I will do each part step by step and patiently.
✓ I usually break it down into smaller steps and then I will do each part step by step and patiently.
'break down to'应为'break down into',介词用法错误。
× I usually break it down to smaller steps and then I will do each part step by step and patiently.
✓ I usually break it down into smaller steps and then I will do each part step by step and patiently.
动词短语'break down'后应接介词'into',表示分解成若干部分。
× Yes, I think my job required me to be patient because I usually have to deal with some sophisticated problems and to talk to some difficult person.
✓ Yes, I think my job requires me to be patient because I usually have to deal with some sophisticated problems and talk to some difficult people.
'job'是现在时态,谓语动词应为'requires',而非过去式'required';'person'应为复数'people',因为指多个困难的人。
× to talk to some difficult person.
✓ to talk to some difficult people.
'person'应为复数'people',因为前面用'some'表示复数。
× Yes, while I am growing up, something in the society has taught me to be patient.
✓ Yes, as I have grown up, something in society has taught me to be patient.
'while I am growing up'时态不合适,表达过去经历应用完成时或过去时;'something in the society'中'the'不必要,应为'something in society'。