Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Well, I want patient person because I am too hurry about some things and also comma patient person is really hard thing. So I'm not a very person patient person as I am really really. Really have a hard time dude.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
Well. Well, something makes me feel impatient that. Something that makes me feel like it's going to slow are going like. So bad so it can make me feel that impatient sometimes.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
Well, absolutely. I feel very very impatience an get angry sometimes. So. Yes. When I have to do something for long time I try to stay patience but. I'm not cannot do it very well.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
What? I don't have a job yet so I don't know that woman job will need to be patient or not.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I don't think that I am more patient now than when I were charred well. It just basically when I grow up, I'm not well. I think that when I will, I think the way I would try I've kind more questions when I was younger and. Yeah, I think that. I am or not?
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.
Ví dụ: I am not a very patient person because I tend to hurry with many things. Being patient is difficult for me, and I often find it hard to stay calm.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự cụ thể và có cấu trúc lộn xộn, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, nêu nguyên nhân cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when things move very slowly, such as waiting in long lines or when someone is late. This makes me feel frustrated sometimes.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích cảm xúc của bạn và cố gắng dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.
Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel impatient and sometimes get angry. I try to be patient, but it is difficult for me.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn có thể trả lời trực tiếp và mở rộng bằng cách nói về dự định hoặc suy nghĩ của bạn liên quan đến sự kiên nhẫn trong công việc tương lai.
Ví dụ: I don't have a job yet, so I'm not sure if it will require patience. However, I think most jobs need some level of patience.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, so sánh sự kiên nhẫn hiện tại và quá khứ, và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: I don't think I am more patient now than when I was a child. In fact, I feel I have become less patient as I have grown older.
× Well, I want patient person because I am too hurry about some things and also comma patient person is really hard thing.
✓ Well, I want to be a patient person because I am too hasty about some things and also being a patient person is really hard.
The phrase 'I want patient person' is incorrect because 'want' should be followed by 'to be' when expressing a desire to become something. 'Too hurry' is incorrect; the correct adverb form is 'too hasty' or 'in a hurry'. Also, 'comma patient person' seems to be a transcription error; it should be 'being a patient person'. The sentence needs proper verb forms and adjective/adverb usage.
× So I'm not a very person patient person as I am really really.
✓ So I'm not a very patient person as I am really, really impatient.
The phrase 'a very person patient person' is incorrect in word order and adjective placement. The correct phrase is 'a very patient person'. Also, 'really really' should be followed by an adjective; here, 'impatient' fits the context. Proper adjective placement and word order are necessary.
× Really have a hard time dude.
✓ I really have a hard time, dude.
The original sentence lacks a subject. Every complete sentence requires a subject and a verb. Adding 'I' as the subject corrects the sentence structure.
× Well. Well, something makes me feel impatient that.
✓ Well, something makes me feel impatient.
The phrase 'impatient that' is incomplete and awkward. Removing 'that' clarifies the sentence. Also, the initial 'Well.' is unnecessary and can be combined into one 'Well,' for smoother speech.
× Something that makes me feel like it's going to slow are going like.
✓ Something that makes me feel like it's going too slow or going badly.
The phrase 'going to slow' should be 'going too slow' with 'too' indicating excess. 'Are going like' is incorrect; 'going badly' or 'going slowly' is appropriate. Correct adverb usage is needed.
× So bad so it can make me feel that impatient sometimes.
✓ It's so bad that it can make me feel impatient sometimes.
The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and structure. 'So bad so' should be 'It's so bad that' to connect cause and effect properly.
× Well, absolutely. I feel very very impatience an get angry sometimes.
✓ Well, absolutely. I feel very, very impatient and get angry sometimes.
The word 'impatience' is a noun; the adjective form 'impatient' is needed here to describe the feeling. Also, 'an' should be 'and' to connect the clauses.
× When I have to do something for long time I try to stay patience but.
✓ When I have to do something for a long time, I try to stay patient but...
The phrase 'for long time' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'stay patience' is incorrect; the adjective 'patient' should be used after 'stay'. A comma is added for clarity.
× I'm not cannot do it very well.
✓ I cannot do it very well.
The phrase 'I'm not cannot' is a double negative and ungrammatical. The correct form is 'I cannot'.
× What? I don't have a job yet so I don't know that woman job will need to be patient or not.
✓ What? I don't have a job yet, so I don't know whether a woman's job will require patience or not.
The phrase 'that woman job' is incorrect; it should be 'a woman's job'. Also, 'will need to be patient' is better expressed as 'will require patience'. The sentence needs proper conjunction and article usage.
× I don't think that I am more patient now than when I were charred well.
✓ I don't think that I am more patient now than when I was a child, well.
The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'; it should be 'was'. 'Charred' is a mishearing or typo for 'child'. Correct past tense and word choice are necessary.
× It just basically when I grow up, I'm not well.
✓ Basically, when I grew up, I wasn't very patient.
The sentence lacks clarity and correct tense. 'Grow up' should be past tense 'grew up' to match the time frame. 'I'm not well' is vague; specifying 'I wasn't very patient' clarifies meaning.
× I think that when I will, I think the way I would try I've kind more questions when I was younger and.
✓ I think that when I was younger, I used to ask more questions.
The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. Simplifying and correcting tense to past ('was younger', 'used to ask') improves clarity.
× Yeah, I think that. I am or not?
✓ Yeah, I think that I am not.
The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing the sentence with 'I am not' clarifies the intended meaning.