Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
I don't think I'm a patient person. I often in patients. In my daily life and online games. If someone doing not well, I always. Having not is disposed with somebody, so I don't think I'm a patient person.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
In my daily life, if someone talk loudly to me or. He talked to me. Luther Lee, I will fell. Non respect so. English that I will fill in patients with him.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
If someone forced me to do something, all I had to do something for a long time. I will feel. Very impatient. I think. I will just give give up. Something I will not keep going to do.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Sure, I think all jobs require people to be patient. In my job I need to survey somebody, so I will keep. Keep the patient with somebody and I will keep calm down. With housing.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Let's undisputed while I was a child, I always tangible with everything. If I don't like something, I will just be angry with something. Now I'm. I'm Grove. So I will keep calm down and be patient with everything.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够清晰,语法和词汇使用有较多错误,影响理解。建议简化句子结构,注意时态和词形变化,避免重复和不完整的句子。
Ví dụ: I don't think I am a patient person. In my daily life and when playing online games, I often get impatient if someone does not perform well.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不连贯,建议使用完整句子并正确使用时态和词汇,明确表达原因。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when someone talks loudly to me because it feels disrespectful.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构混乱,重复用词,建议使用连贯的句子表达感受和结果,避免断句。
Ví dụ: If I am forced to do something for a long time, I feel very impatient and might give up instead of continuing.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅,词汇使用不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子表达工作内容和耐心的重要性。
Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires patience because I need to interview people, so I have to stay calm and patient during the process.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误和语法问题,建议使用正确的词汇表达对比,并用连贯句子说明变化。
Ví dụ: When I was a child, I was easily angry if I didn't like something. Now, I am more mature and can stay calm and patient in most situations.
× I often in patients.
✓ I am often impatient.
这里的错误是单复数问题,'patients' 应为形容词 'impatient',表示'不耐烦的'。原句中使用了名词复数形式,导致语法错误。应使用形容词形式来描述人的性格。
× If someone doing not well, I always.
✓ If someone is not doing well, I always...
这里缺少助动词 'is',动词 'doing' 需要与助动词连用构成现在进行时。原句中缺少助动词,导致语法不完整。
× Having not is disposed with somebody, so I don't think I'm a patient person.
✓ I am not disposed to be patient with somebody, so I don't think I'm a patient person.
原句结构混乱,'Having not is disposed' 语法错误,应该使用正确的句子结构表达不耐烦的意思。
× If someone talk loudly to me or.
✓ If someone talks loudly to me or...
动词 'talk' 在第三人称单数时应加 's',这里应为 'talks'。
× He talked to me. Luther Lee, I will fell.
✓ He talks to me rudely, I will feel...
时态错误,描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时,'talked' 应改为 'talks','fell' 应为 'feel'。
× Non respect so.
✓ disrespected, so...
'Non respect' 不是正确表达,应使用形容词 'disrespected' 来表达被不尊重的感觉。
× English that I will fill in patients with him.
✓ I will feel impatient with him.
'fill in patients' 是错误表达,应为 'feel impatient',表示感到不耐烦。
× If someone forced me to do something, all I had to do something for a long time.
✓ If someone forces me to do something, and I have to do it for a long time...
句子结构不完整且时态不一致,应使用一般现在时描述习惯或事实。
× I will feel. Very impatient.
✓ I will feel very impatient.
句子中不应有句号断开,应连贯表达。
× I think. I will just give give up.
✓ I think I will just give up.
句子中多余的句号和重复单词 'give give',应删除多余部分使句子通顺。
× Sure, I think all jobs require people to be patient.
✓ Sure, I think all jobs require people to be patient.
此句无错误,保持原句。
× In my job I need to survey somebody, so I will keep. Keep the patient with somebody and I will keep calm down.
✓ In my job, I need to serve somebody, so I will keep patient with somebody and keep calm.
'survey' 应为 'serve','keep the patient' 应为 'keep patient','keep calm down' 应为 'keep calm'。
× With housing.
✓ with housing.
此处语句不完整,可能是口误或断句错误,建议补充完整句子。
× Let's undisputed while I was a child, I always tangible with everything.
✓ When I was a child, I was always impatient with everything.
'Let's undisputed' 和 'tangible' 用法错误,句子结构混乱,应改为正确表达。
× Now I'm. I'm Grove.
✓ Now I'm grown up.
'Grove' 是错误单词,应为 'grown up',表示长大了。
× So I will keep calm down and be patient with everything.
✓ So I will keep calm and be patient with everything.
'keep calm down' 是错误表达,应为 'keep calm'。