PatiencePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you a patient person?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. My parents and my friends, they said that I'm a patient person, like in some daily life I will be patient to do something well.

Giám khảo

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Thí sinh

I think is the messy stuff or the wrong schedule. Or the day that I'm in a bad mood that will make me feel impatient.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Thí sinh

First of all, I will feel like I need to keep going and I need to. Received the goal that I. Replying to myself. Jeff.

Giám khảo

Does your job require you to be patient?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. I think some of the drops that need people to be patient 'cause it's like a normal, normal thing.

Giám khảo

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so. I feels like when I grow up. There's a lot of things that I have to do in our daily life. Sometimes if I have a lot of messy stuff to settle out, I won't be patient.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are you a patient person?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免重复和语法错误。可以直接回答问题,并用具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when I learn new skills, I take my time to practice carefully until I master them.

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯,使用连接词,并具体说明原因。避免简单罗列。

Ví dụ: I usually feel impatient when things are disorganized or when my schedule is disrupted because it makes me anxious and stressed.

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且含糊,应清晰表达感受并使用完整句子。

Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I try to stay focused and remind myself of the goal to keep motivated.

Does your job require you to be patient?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更具体,避免模糊表达,说明工作中具体需要耐心的方面。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires patience, especially when dealing with customers who have many questions or concerns.

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯,使用连接词,并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: I don't think I'm more patient now than when I was a child because adult responsibilities often make me feel stressed and less patient.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I feels like when I grow up.

I feel like when I grow up.

主语是第一人称单数“I”,谓语动词应使用原形“feel”,而不是“feels”。“feels”用于第三人称单数。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× My parents and my friends, they said that I'm a patient person, like in some daily life I will be patient to do something well.

My parents and my friends said that I'm a patient person. In daily life, I am patient when doing something well.

句中“they”重复指代“My parents and my friends”,造成冗余,应去掉。句子结构不清晰,建议拆分并调整表达,使意思更明确。

Sentence structure errors

× First of all, I will feel like I need to keep going and I need to. Received the goal that I. Replying to myself. Jeff.

First of all, I feel like I need to keep going and achieve the goal. I keep encouraging myself.

原句结构混乱,断句不当,导致意思不明。应调整句子结构,使表达连贯完整。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Sometimes if I have a lot of messy stuff to settle out, I won't be patient.

Sometimes if I have a lot of messy stuff to settle, I won't be patient.

“settle out”用法不当,正确表达应为“settle”,表示处理、解决。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think is the messy stuff or the wrong schedule.

I think it is the messy stuff or the wrong schedule.

句子缺少主语“it”,导致语法错误。应补充主语使句子完整。

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