Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。より自然な英語表現を使い、具体的な説明を簡潔に述べることを心がけましょう。例えば、「Yes, I am a patient person because I can handle stressful situations calmly, especially at my startup job.」のように答えると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am a patient person because I can handle stressful situations calmly, especially at my startup job.

Gợi ý: 答えが少し曖昧で、文法的な誤りもあります。質問に直接答え、具体的な理由や状況を明確に述べることが大切です。例えば、「I feel impatient when I have too many tasks to complete in a short time, like learning English and handling work duties.」のように答えましょう。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have too many tasks to complete in a short time, like learning English and handling work duties.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、具体例を簡潔に述べることが必要です。例えば、「I usually stay motivated for a long time. For example, I have been learning English for four years.」のように答えましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually stay motivated for a long time. For example, I have been learning English for four years.

Gợi ý: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な理由を述べることが重要です。例えば、「Yes, my job requires patience because I communicate with many stakeholders like sales and customer success teams.」のように答えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires patience because I communicate with many stakeholders like sales and customer success teams.

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、内容が不明瞭です。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な比較を簡潔に述べることが必要です。例えば、「Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to get stressed easily, like when I played football.」のように答えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to get stressed easily, like when I played football.

× Yes, I'm different tree patient person.

✓ Yes, I'm a very patient person.

The phrase 'different tree patient person' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a very patient person' to describe the quality properly. 'Different tree' is likely a mishearing or miswriting of 'very'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'patient person'.

× I'm currently working for start up.

✓ I'm currently working for a startup.

The noun 'startup' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× It's so pretty.

✓ It's so pretty good.

The word 'pretty' is an adverb meaning 'fairly' or 'quite' and should modify an adjective or adverb. 'Pretty' alone as a predicate adjective is unusual here. Possibly the intended phrase was 'pretty good' or 'pretty nice' to express a positive feeling.

× I don't usually feel any a lot of stress.

✓ I don't usually feel a lot of stress.

The phrase 'any a lot of' is incorrect. 'A lot of' is the correct quantifier to express a large amount. 'Any' should not be used together with 'a lot of' in this context.

× Sometimes I have a lot of task I must do, such as learning English.

✓ Sometimes I have a lot of tasks I must do, such as learning English.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because 'a lot of' requires a plural noun when referring to countable items.

× A lot of task in my job.

✓ A lot of tasks in my job.

Same as above, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' after 'a lot of'.

× I usually can. Have. Motivation for long time.

✓ I usually can have motivation for a long time.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. The corrected sentence combines the fragments into a coherent sentence and adds the article 'a' before 'long time'.

× I continue to learning English.

✓ I continue learning English.

The verb 'continue' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. 'Continue to learning' is incorrect; it should be 'continue learning' or 'continue to learn'.

× Learn English from four years.

✓ I have been learning English for four years.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper tense. The present perfect continuous tense 'have been learning' is appropriate to express an action continuing from the past to the present. Also, 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate duration.

× That's a everybody.

✓ That's everybody.

The article 'a' should not be used before 'everybody' because 'everybody' is an indefinite pronoun and does not take an article.

× I have much patience.

✓ I have a lot of patience.

'Much' is generally used in negative sentences or questions with uncountable nouns. In affirmative sentences, 'a lot of' is more natural and common.

× Because my job. Have. Meli stake holders.

✓ Because my job has many stakeholders.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'job'. 'Meli' is likely a mishearing of 'many'. The sentence is corrected to be complete and grammatically correct.

× Such errors sales, customer success, so so so communication is one of the important thing for my job.

✓ Such as sales, customer success, so communication is one of the important things for my job.

The phrase 'errors sales' is incorrect; likely intended 'such as sales'. 'So so so' is unnecessary and should be removed. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun.

× Yeah, I'm definitely more. Patient then when I was young. Younger.

✓ Yeah, I'm definitely more patient than when I was younger.

'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. 'Younger' is the correct comparative adjective. The sentence is combined properly for clarity.

× For example, I when I was chilled I prayed football.

✓ For example, when I was a child, I played football.

'Chilled' is incorrect; the correct word is 'child'. 'Prayed' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'played'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Sometimes I felt managed to us.

✓ Sometimes I felt managed by us.

The phrase is unclear and likely incorrect. Possibly intended 'Sometimes I felt stressed by us' or 'Sometimes I felt managed by others'. Without more context, the correction assumes 'managed by us' is intended, but the sentence is awkward and may need rephrasing.

× I felt stressed a lot of times.

✓ I felt stressed many times.

'A lot of times' is acceptable but 'many times' is more natural in this context. The sentence is otherwise correct.