Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, use correct articles and prepositions, and add a brief specific detail. Keep it within 1–2 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually have a snack in the evening with a cup of tea. For example, I often eat a small piece of cake or some fruit around 7 p.m. after work.

Gợi ý: Answer the question clearly and give a reason. Avoid contradictory words (e.g., 'hope' vs 'think') and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain why you think so and provide a brief suggestion or contrast.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think most snacks are healthy because they often contain a lot of oil and salt. However, healthier options like nuts or yogurt can be better choices.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and give a short specific detail (what snacks, how often). Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I ate snacks often when I was young. For example, I usually had biscuits or chips after school almost every day because my parents allowed us a small treat.

Gợi ý: Be slightly more specific and natural. Use a topic sentence and add one detail about frequency or reason. Include a variety or a healthier alternative to show range.

Ví dụ: I like eating potato fries, especially when I go out with friends. I also enjoy fruit or yogurt at home when I want something lighter.

× I usually eat the snacks in evening with the tea.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the evening with tea.

The sentence uses unnecessary definite articles and misses the preposition 'the' before 'evening'. 'The snacks' should be 'snacks' because speaking generally we omit 'the'. 'in evening' is incorrect; use 'in the evening'. 'the tea' can be simply 'tea' when speaking generally. Suggestion: omit unnecessary 'the' and add 'the' before 'evening'. Grammar problem type ID:17

× Yes, I hope it is not healthy for our body because it is a some of oil.

✓ No, I don't think it is healthy for our body because it contains some oil.

The original uses 'hope' incorrectly; modality here should express belief, so 'don't think' or 'don't believe' is appropriate. 'It is not healthy' is fine but 'it is a some of oil' is ungrammatical: use 'contains some oil' or 'has a lot of oil'. Also 'our body' is awkward; 'our bodies' or 'the body' are better. Suggestion: use a verb like 'contain' for ingredients and correct determiner and pluralization. Grammar problem type ID:4

× Yes, I definitely eat snacks when I was in young because I love a lot of snacks to eat in evening.

✓ Yes, I definitely ate snacks when I was young because I loved eating a lot of snacks in the evening.

The question asks about past habits, so past tense should be used: 'ate' not 'eat'. 'when I was in young' is incorrect—use 'when I was young'. 'I love a lot of snacks to eat in evening' mixes present tense and wrong structure; use 'I loved eating a lot of snacks in the evening'. Also add 'the' before 'evening'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for actions and use correct verb forms like 'loved eating'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I like to eat snacks like potato fries.

✓ I like to eat snacks like French fries.

The phrase 'potato fries' is nonstandard; the common term is 'French fries' or 'fried potatoes'. Also 'snacks like' is acceptable but 'French fries' is the natural collocation. Suggestion: use standard food names and collocations. Grammar problem type ID:11