Part 1
Giám khảo
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually eat snacks with my friends in my leisure time. Last weekend we got together and we watched the movies so we ate more and more snacks such as fried chickens, fried tips and others.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think it is healthy for me to eat snacks because most of the snacks are filled with oil and sugar so I think it's unhealthy if I eat more.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. When I was a child I liked to try all different kinds of snacks that I can I could have. So I was really curious about their flavors and I will ask it for my mother.
Giám khảo
What snacks do you like to eat?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I think fried chickens is my favorite snacks because I think it has delicious flavors and when I am hungry I think it is a good food for me to eat.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言较为自然,但存在重复和语法错误,如“fried tips”应为“fried chips”,且“more and more snacks”重复冗余。建议避免重复表达,注意单复数和词汇准确性。
Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks with my friends during our free time. For example, last weekend we watched a movie together and enjoyed snacks like fried chicken and potato chips.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容明确,但表达略显简单,且“if I eat more”表达不够准确。建议使用更丰富的词汇和更准确的表达方式,增强语言的连贯性。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because most of them contain a lot of oil and sugar, which can be harmful if consumed excessively.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“that I can I could have”和“ask it for my mother”。建议加强语法准确性,避免重复,并使用正确的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I was curious about different flavors, so I used to ask my mother to buy various kinds of snacks for me.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在单复数错误,如“fried chickens”应为“fried chicken”,且表达重复“I think”。建议简洁表达,注意语法和词汇的准确性。
Ví dụ: Honestly, my favorite snack is fried chicken because it tastes delicious and satisfies my hunger quickly.
× Last weekend we got together and we watched the movies so we ate more and more snacks such as fried chickens, fried tips and others.
✓ Last weekend we got together and we watched movies so we ate more and more snacks such as fried chicken, fried tips and others.
“movies”前面不需要定冠词“the”,因为这里指的是一般的电影,不是特指的电影。"fried chickens"应为不可数名词"fried chicken",表示炸鸡肉,而不是多只鸡。
× Honestly, I think fried chickens is my favorite snacks because I think it has delicious flavors and when I am hungry I think it is a good food for me to eat.
✓ Honestly, I think fried chicken is my favorite snack because I think it has delicious flavors and when I am hungry I think it is a good food for me to eat.
"fried chickens"应为不可数名词"fried chicken",表示炸鸡肉。"snacks"应改为单数"snack",因为前面用的是单数"my favorite",表示最喜欢的一种零食。