Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks after lunch because I feel a bit tired and need some energy to continue working.

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Ví dụ: Yes, I believe eating snacks like nuts, fruits, and vegetables is healthy because they provide essential nutrients that help keep my body strong and energetic.

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Ví dụ: When I was young, I used to eat snacks after every meal, but now I eat them less often because I know eating too many snacks can be unhealthy.

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Ví dụ: I like to eat nuts and fruits because they are nutritious and give me energy to stay active throughout the day.

× I think it's a great meal to to eat because you lose energy and eat.

✓ I think it's a great meal to eat because you lose energy and get hungry.

The phrase 'to to eat' contains a repetition error and the verb 'eat' is incorrectly used after 'because you lose energy'. The correct form is 'to eat' once, and 'get hungry' better expresses the idea of needing food after losing energy.

× Snacks can help me to fit up and do work.

✓ Snacks can help me to perk up and do work.

The phrase 'fit up' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'perk up' meaning to become more energetic or alert. This is a vocabulary error related to verb usage.

× I think that that it is healthy for me to eat snacks because I eat only nuts, fruits and vegetables.

✓ I think that it is healthy for me to eat snacks because I eat only nuts, fruits, and vegetables.

The repetition of 'that' is a redundancy error. Only one 'that' is needed in this sentence.

× I think that the fruits and other meals can improve my health to do my strong body and it improve my goodness.

✓ I think that fruits and other foods can improve my health, help me build a strong body, and improve my well-being.

The phrase 'to do my strong body' is incorrect; it should be 'help me build a strong body'. Also, 'it improve my goodness' is incorrect; 'improve my well-being' is more appropriate. 'Meals' is replaced with 'foods' for clarity.

× I often eat snacks. When I were young I eat snacks, but after breakfast, after lunch, after dinner.

✓ I often ate snacks. When I was young, I ate snacks after breakfast, after lunch, and after dinner.

The verbs 'eat' and 'were' are incorrectly used in the past tense context. The correct past tense forms are 'ate' and 'was' for singular subject 'I'.

× And I think it is bad for health to eat so much so many fruits and others meals.

✓ And I think it is bad for health to eat so many fruits and other meals.

The phrase 'so much so many' is redundant and incorrect. 'So many' is appropriate for countable nouns like 'fruits'. Also, 'others meals' should be 'other meals'.

× But now I eat more rarely and eat can feed me.

✓ But now I eat less often and the food can nourish me.

The phrase 'eat more rarely' is awkward; 'eat less often' is more natural. 'Eat can feed me' is ungrammatical; it should be 'the food can nourish me' or 'eating can nourish me'.

× So I would like to eat nuts and fruits.

✓ I would like to eat nuts and fruits.

The phrase 'So I would like' is unnecessary here; starting directly with 'I would like' is clearer and more natural.

× I think that these meals, these snacks can improve my body.

✓ I think that these snacks can improve my health.

'Improve my body' is vague and unnatural; 'improve my health' is the correct expression.

× I can feed and also I think that the snacks give me more energy for my daily routine, for my daily life.

✓ They can nourish me, and I also think that snacks give me more energy for my daily routine and daily life.

'I can feed' is incorrect; the subject should be 'they' referring to snacks. Also, 'for my daily routine, for my daily life' is repetitive; combining with 'and' is better.