Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, instead of 'when I am craving', say 'when I feel like eating something'. Also, 'I have not time to ready some breakfast' should be 'I don't have time to prepare breakfast'. Use linking words like 'also' appropriately and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the evening when I feel like eating something. Also, sometimes I have snacks with my morning tea if I don't have time to prepare breakfast.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, say 'eating packaged snacks is unhealthy because they can cause many diseases if consumed in large quantities'. Also, use 'however' to contrast ideas. Avoid redundancy like 'for the health'.

Ví dụ: I think eating packaged snacks is unhealthy because they can cause many diseases if consumed in large quantities. However, eating a small portion of snacks in the evening is not harmful.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar corrections. For example, say 'My favorite snacks were green Lays'. Use past tense consistently, e.g., 'He always sent me various kinds of snacks'. Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence by using linking words like 'also'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to eat snacks a lot when I was a child. My favorite snacks were green Lays. Also, my uncle who lived in the UK used to send me various kinds of snacks.

Gợi ý: Your answer can be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. For example, say 'My favorite snack is Lays because they are slightly sweet'. Use 'also' instead of 'moreover' for smoother flow. Say 'Vadas, which are Indian snacks, are crispy and spicy'. Keep sentences concise and connected.

Ví dụ: My favorite snack is Lays because they are slightly sweet. I also like biscuits and cookies as they go well with tea or coffee. Sometimes, I prefer Vadas, which are Indian snacks that are crispy and spicy.

× I mostly eat snacks in the evening when I am craving.

✓ I mostly eat snacks in the evening when I am craving them.

The verb 'craving' requires an object to complete its meaning. Here, 'craving' should be followed by 'them' to indicate what is being craved, which are the snacks.

× Moreover, I also prefer to eat snacks with my morning tea sometimes when I have not time to ready some breakfast.

✓ Moreover, I also prefer to eat snacks with my morning tea sometimes when I do not have time to prepare some breakfast.

The phrase 'have not time' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have time'. Also, 'ready' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'prepare' when referring to making breakfast.

× No, eating packaged foods or snacks is not good for health because they can cause a lot of diseases if they are eaten in a much quantity.

✓ No, eating packaged foods or snacks is not good for health because they can cause a lot of diseases if they are eaten in large quantities.

The phrase 'a much quantity' is incorrect. The correct quantifier for countable or uncountable nouns in this context is 'large quantities'.

× But eating small portion of snacks in the evening is not harmful for the health.

✓ But eating a small portion of snacks in the evening is not harmful to health.

The phrase 'harmful for the health' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'harmful to health'. Also, 'small portion' needs an article 'a' before it.

× He always send me various kind of snacks.

✓ He always sent me various kinds of snacks.

The verb 'send' should be in the past tense 'sent' to agree with 'always' in past habitual action. Also, 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types.

× My most favorite snacks is Lays because they are very sweet.

✓ My most favorite snack is Lays because it is very sweet.

The subject 'snacks' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular. Also, 'Lays' is a brand treated as singular here, so 'snack' should be singular and verb 'is' matches it. Additionally, 'sweet' is not appropriate for savory chips; however, correction focuses on grammar.

× Moreover, I also like biscuits and cookies because they taste very good with tea or coffee.

✓ Moreover, I also like biscuits and cookies because they taste very good with tea or coffee.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Apart from that, sometimes I prefer Vadas which is an Indian origin snacks and they are very crispy and spicy.

✓ Apart from that, sometimes I prefer Vadas, which are Indian-origin snacks and they are very crispy and spicy.

'Vadas' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'Indian origin snacks' should be hyphenated as 'Indian-origin snacks' to function as a compound adjective.