Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some confusing phrases like "nursery levels of clothing workers." Try to give a clear and natural response by specifying the usual times you eat snacks and why. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks between 10:30 and 12:00 noon. Sometimes, I have a small snack in the afternoon to keep my energy levels up during work.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question with a clear opinion and explain why, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid confusing phrases and focus on clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy if I choose baked or non-fried options. I prefer these because they are better for my health than fried snacks.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by avoiding filler words like "Uh" and by adding linking words to make the response more coherent. Also, try to provide a bit more detail or a reason to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For example, I liked chocolates, biscuits, and pastries because they tasted sweet and were easy to eat.

Gợi ý: Your answer lists snacks well but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by avoiding repetition. Also, try to explain why you prefer these snacks to make your answer more specific and natural.

Ví dụ: I like to eat chocolates, biscuits, baked cookies, pastries, and cakes because they are baked rather than fried, which makes them healthier options.

× I usually eat snacks around midday to 10:50 AM and 12:00 noon.

✓ I usually eat snacks between 10:50 AM and 12:00 noon.

The preposition 'around' is incorrectly used with a time range. The correct preposition to indicate a range between two times is 'between'. Using 'around' suggests an approximate time, not a range.

× Sometime I also have a small snack in the afternoon to keep my nursery levels of clothing workers ready.

✓ Sometimes I also have a small snack in the afternoon to keep my energy levels up.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'nursery levels of clothing workers ready' is incorrect and unclear; it seems to be a misstatement. The intended meaning is likely to maintain energy levels, so 'energy levels up' is appropriate.

× Yes I would prefer it as a healthy child for me as I used to go for non fried and big snacks baked.

✓ Yes, I prefer healthy snacks because I usually choose non-fried and baked snacks.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'I would prefer it as a healthy child for me' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the subject's preference and corrects the pronoun and sentence structure.