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Part 1

Giám khảo

When do you usually eat snacks now?

Thí sinh

I usually eat snacks when I'm hungry. I mean, if there's a lot of time I need to go to eat dinner or lunch, I may eat a snack first.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so. Nice things ate too much fat to people. It's unhealthy food. But I mean, it's necessary to eat snacks, you know, It can give people some good feeling about food.

Giám khảo

Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. I mean, children all like snacks. They like chocolate, hamburgers or maybe chopsticks, a lot of things. And I usually eat snacks when I'm a kid. It's good to eat.

Giám khảo

What snacks do you like to eat?

Thí sinh

When I was a kid I prefer to eat chopsticks, but nowadays I like to eat French chips.

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Part 1

When do you usually eat snacks now?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免重复表达,如“I mean”。建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节,例如具体时间或场合。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon between lunch and dinner when I feel a bit hungry and need some energy.

Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用正确句式,避免口语化填充词,明确表达观点并给出具体原因。

Ví dụ: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because many snacks contain a lot of fat and sugar. However, sometimes snacks can make people feel happy and satisfied.

Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当,应使用过去时描述过去的习惯。避免重复和不准确的词汇,提供更具体的细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I liked chocolate, hamburgers, and other treats that many children enjoy.

What snacks do you like to eat?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态和词汇使用不准确,“prefer”应使用过去式。建议补充更多细节,说明喜欢的原因。

Ví dụ: When I was a kid, I preferred to eat candy sticks, but nowadays I like to eat French fries because they are crispy and tasty.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× I may eat a snack first.

I might eat a snack first.

这里使用'may'表示可能性,但在表达假设或不确定的可能性时,'might'更合适,语气更委婉。建议用'might'来表达可能性。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Nice things ate too much fat to people.

Nice things have too much fat for people.

原句中'ate'是动词过去式,且用法错误,应使用动词'have'表示含有脂肪;'too much fat to people'应改为'too much fat for people',表示对人来说脂肪过多。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× And I usually eat snacks when I'm a kid.

And I usually ate snacks when I was a kid.

句子时态不一致,描述过去习惯应使用过去时态;'I'm a kid'应改为'I was a kid'。

Present tense issue

× When I was a kid I prefer to eat chopsticks, but nowadays I like to eat French chips.

When I was a kid I preferred to eat chopsticks, but nowadays I like to eat French chips.

描述过去的习惯动作应使用过去时态,'prefer'应改为'preferred'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FatPlump; Thick; Large
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HungryRavenous; Eager
NiceEnjoyable; Pleasant; Polite; Subtle; Fine
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